Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Enakkoru Girl friend venumae - Part IV

P.S : Sorry for making the posting of this part so delayedddddd....It was very hard writing this part.... enna ithu konjam pudhusu enakku :D... and also... it came very lengthy.......it was unavoidable...so story finishes only in the next part.. :D athukku kindly execuse...

Read the first part here..
Read the second part here..
Read the third part here..

The full version is being tracked here



[ 3 days later…Vijay’s cubicle… Raju comes to meet Vijay. He is not there..only his team mate Vishal is there]
Raju : hey Vishal, enna da machan, namma guru Vijay ah rendu naala aalai kaanom?

Vishal: avan friend Mani nu oruthan DSP ponnai love pannitu irunthan… ivan than vazhakkam pola avanukkum kaadhal guru… antha love matter la konjam prachinai aagiduchi…. Odi poi kalyanam than kattikalama nu antha ponnai izhuthuttu poi Tirupathi la vachu thaali kattitan…. Vijay ah than satchi kaiyezhuthu podarathukka kooptirunthan… athukkaga tirupathi poitu, inniku kaalaila train la Chennai kilambirukkan.. vanthuruvan nu sonnan office ku, innum konja nerathila

Raju : adappavi ….aanalum avan friend ukku sema dhairiyam thaanda… DSP ponnaiye izhutthutu odirukkana…….antha ponnum paaren…. 20 varusham paasama valartha appa va vittutu evan koodavo odi porathuku accept panniruka

Vishal : haha… avalum ithe maathiri oru guilty feel la than da irunthirukka..but enna aachu theriyuma..avanga tirupathi ku car la escape aayitu iruntha time la andhra border la oru check post la avanga car ah madakittanga…. Car ah check pannathu yaaru theriyuma?.... antha ponnoda Appa dhan

Raju : adra sakkai… antha paiyani kozhi kunju amukkara maathiri kootitu poi laadam kattirupar la

Vishal : athaan illa…. ivan thannoda pudhu Maruthi Zen ah eduthuttu poirunthirukkan…avar antha car ah ye suthi suthi athoda azhaga paarthuttu irunthuttaaru… avaroda ponnai kandukkave illa pogumbothu Good choice son nu vera car ah pathi appreciate pannirukaru..… appuram enna… rendu perum escape aayitaanga


Raju : enna kodumai da.. sontha ponnu pakkathula irukkarathu kooda theriyama car ah paarthu jollu vittutu irukkira manushan… kudumbatha gavanikkaratha vittutu, azhaga irukkanga nu ethanai ponnunga la paarthu jollu vittutu irunthiruppar… ipadi irresponsible ah oru Appa iruntha entha ponnum odi poi kalyanam panikalam thappe illae…. Hmmmmm… sari namma Purasawalkam Prakash ah enga oru vaarama aalai kanom

Vishal : nethikku than avanga veetukku phone panni visaarichen…thalai ore feelings ahm….

Raju : en enna aachu?

Vishal : etho oru ponnu pinnadi suthirukkan…ava pesi pazhagarathai vachu ava love panra nu ninaichittu irunthirukkan.. kadseela athu marriage invitation ah kondu vanthu neeti…nee than da en best friend..unakku than first invitation..nee kandippa varanum nu sollirukku…..

Raju : hahaha..ada pavi… ponnunga manasai correct ah purinjikka koodiya arivu en koodave piranthathu nu peethikittu iruppanae.. avana ippadi emaanthan?

Vishal : ada, avan sonnathu, avan koodave pirantha avan thambi arivazhagana pathi… ivan oru bekku… etho aasai kolaaru……. Thappa think pannitu, ippa varutha pattutu irukkan…… Sari nee oru ponnukku nool vittutu irunthiye..antha matter enna aachu..love ah sonniya illiya?

Vishal : hehe solren da solren..inniku solla poraen.. ennoda kadhala kavithai yave ezhuthi vachirukaen :D

Raju : ada… kazhudhai nee kavithai kooda ezhuthariyaada.. vaasi ketpom…

Vishal : hehhee..ava daily office ku scooty la vara illa? Athai vachu start panirukkaen :D…
Scooty-ile vanthu
Duty seiyyum cutie,
My dear beauty,
Love panna unakku naan kodukkava KT,
Neethane en kadhali, en athaiyin beti…
I love you sollen… atleast oru vaati…


Raju : :) :)… appadi podu... Paarthu paarthu… nee T.Rajendar oda sishyan nu ninaichu ponnu bayanthu da poguthu…

[Next cubicle Manju gets up]

Manju : enda dei Vishal..….. eppa paarthalum unakkum Vijay kum girl friends, love ithai pathiye than pecha.. pesarathukku vera ethuvume kidaikkaliya….. en intha nalla pullai Raju vaiyum kedukareenga…

Ramesh : sari sari nee niruthu… unakku boy friend thevai padumbothum naanum Vijay um thaan unakku help pannuvom…po po naan kudutha andha velaiya mattum paaru

Manju : kashtam da unga kooda (thalai la adichikittu she gets back to her work)

(Vijay walks into his cubicle just at that moment)

Raju : vaada Vijay vaa.. vaa.. Vishal ellam sonnan… kaadhaluku idea koduthuttu irunthathu poi, ippo kalyanam panni vaikkara alavu poitiya nee..kalakkare po

Vijay: :) :) sari sari antha matter ah vidu…unnoda search entha level la irukku.. un love match ah catch panniya

Raju: hehe hehe… :D :D

Vijay : ennada ennada..… brush pannatha un teeth la nee overaa blush panratha paartha etho un thotathula poothirukku pola?

Raju : :D athellam illa da… nee sona maathiri ovvoru women’s college community ah ponena.. Athu la iruntha photos lam paarthu, athula azhaga, en height ku correct ah, naan expect panra maathiri character ah oru 2,3 ponnungala select panninaen

Vijay : athu eppadi da raasa character analysis lam pannirukae?

Raju : vera epadi..avanga scrapbook padichu paarthu than…. Oralavu guess panna mudiyum la..avangalukku eppadi patta makkal scrap panraanga..avanga andha scrap ku eppadi reply panraanga nu..

Vijay : pottu thaaku… pachaiya sonna uravu paarkaren nu solli nee ulavu paarthiruke.. ithellam therinjavathu ponnunga avanga scrapbook la privacy maintain pannalam..

Raju : pannalame… naane advice panren inimael :D sari kelu… athula oru ponnu da Sujatha nu peru…. Soooper ah iruntha da :D

Vijay : sari sari overaa vazhiyaathe… matter ku vaa

Raju: :D ava join pannirukkara communities lam paarthen…. Athula oru community Law Colleges in Tamilnadu nu irunthuchu…. Naanum athukkula ponena… Saw her message there…inquiring for the best law college in tamilnadu, for her brother nu solliruntha… ithu than pesarathukku sariyana chance nu thonichu, athe community la naanum sernthu, antha message ku reply adichen….

Vijay: ennanu

Raju:Hey Sujatha, if ur brother takes law for profession, will he become your brother-in-law nu :)

Vijay: mokkai mokkai..angayum un mokkaiya vidaliya nee…..

Raju: :D free free……. Oru convo start panna enakku ithai vida vera vazhi therilae… message pottutane thavira…. I was skeptical if she wud answer to my message or if she will come and frown at me for ridiculing her….. enakku nu oru image irukku la..athu spoil aayidumo nu bayam irunthuchu

Vijay: mannangatti image…. Sari appuram?

Raju: inniku morning orkut check panna…..surprise surprise…..she has sent me a scrap at my scrap book asking if I really know, about which will be the best law college in tamilnadu… appuram enna.. oorula law related ah evan nlam theriyumo avanungalukelam phone ah pottu, info kettu I sent her a detailed mail…… ithai vache I sent her a friend request in orkut and she accepted that :D

Vijay: adra sakkai..adra sakkai..adra sakkai…. Machaan..ninaikkave illae… nee ivvalo seekiram en idea va successful ah implement pannuave nu… theritta da theritta

Raju: :D sonna namba maate nee… naan anupicha mail ku reply anupicha, Thanks a lot nu solitu, And she further asked me a detail about a particular law college.. ithu thaanda saaku nu, ithai pathi discuss pannalam vaa nu avala G-Talk layum add pannitaen… :D we were chatting all day today morning…… mudhalla ava keta details ah oru friend kitta irunthu vaangi sollitu, appuram konja konjama personal ah pesa aarambichom

Vijay: sooper da sooper….. machi...sonnathai tak nu pidichikittae… unakku karpoora buthi da

Vishal: ivanukku karpoora buthi na, ivanai purinjikkathavanga lam kazhudhai ya enna (chuckles)

Vijay: ada podhumada un comedy… machi Raju nee solluda..appuram enna sonna

Raju: hehe pesittu irukkumbothu oru matter sonna…… actually naan avalukku mokkai ya reply panni message anupinnatha paarthuttu she got semma irritated ahm.. ennnai blast pannalam nu than en profile ku vanthirukka…… aana vanthava, ennoda testimonials lam padichu paarthuttu I am a genuine guy, nalla paiyan nu therinjukittalam :D athunala than she scrapped normally appadinu sonna…. Podhuva theriyaatha guys avalai tease panna left right vaangiduvaalam… neenga lam appavi pullai nu ezhuthina testimonial thaanda ennai kaapathirukku :D :D

Vijay: dei note pannungada note pannungada… testimonial kum matrimonial kum link irukkurathai note pannungada…!!!

Raju: :D :D machi elam un plan da…. Nee than da enakku Guru……. Intha idea ku naan unakku Royalty tharen

Vijay: Royalty lam venaam… namma nair kadai la Royal ah oru Tea vangi thaa..vaa

Raju: athillada… unakku ethuna onnnu seiyyanum pola thonuthu da enakku

Vijay: enda en… etho friendship ku nu idea tharen… athukku ethuna thanthu enakku double M.A degree vangi koduthudathe da machaan

Raju: hehee ok ok…. Sari next action plan…..ippa aarambichathu… love ah maarurathukkum lets work together da.. help pannudaa.. :D

Vijay: kanna…. Oru ponnai paarka pesara varai than intha planning together lam… but to-get-her laam , nee ye than yosikkanum…… athukku lam yaarum help panna koodathu… purinjatha…

Raju: saringa Guru… :) :) :) sari atleast ethuna advice pannalamae :D

Vijay: oh sure sure…. Inimael thaan nee gavanama irukkanum…. Maranthum avalai offend pannidathe… normal ah ve pesu…. There will be many difference of opinion between you two… athellam perisu pannathe… ponnunga ninaikkarathu thappa irukkara maathiriye thonum, nammala purinjikkama pesaranga nu thonum… that is not misunderstanding… but actually a Miss’ understanding…ithu therinjathan kalayanam aana pinnadi Mrs’ understanding unakku perfect ah varum….

Raju: aaha aaha… arumaiyana karuthukkal..aazhntha sinthanai…

Vijay: sari.. mooodu… keep it up and good luck :)

Raju: Thanks da….

Ippadiyaaga namma Raju life layum oru new episode aarambikkuthu… Raju target panna antha ponnu Sujatha oru B.Comm graduate… College Studies lam intha year than mudichittu, aduthu velai thedittu irukkara ponnu… ava parents rendu perum velai paarkiranga… thambi yum tuition, friends nu velila poiduvaan…so veetula vetti ya irukara ponnu.. athunala endha neramum online, chatting, orkut thaan….

Indha details lam Raju, Sujatha kitta chat pannathula irunthu therinjikittathu…. Raju vum bench laye irukkarathala, Sujatha kitta kadalai pottutu irukkarathukku vasathiya irunthathu… daily pesa pesa, rendu perum semma thick friends aagaranga….. Raju soft ah, entha methavithanamo, thimiro illama pesurathunala Sujatha ku Raju mela semma respect… she even seeks advice from Raju on some of her decisions regarding her future….. Ippadi valarum relation, next level ku, athavathu mobile la pesikkara range ku varuthu…. Raju call pannuvan…Sujatha va…. Sujatha vum call pannuva… oru ring koduthuttu cut panniduva....( enna parkareenga… ithukku peru call panratha nu ketka koodathu… oru Miss oda call nu thaane athai Miss-ed call nu solraanga :D … so no silly questions… .) Sujatha missed call kodutha udane Raju call return pannuvan…(vera vazhi?? ) rendu perum sernthu mani kanakka pesuvaanga… pesuvaanga..pesikittae irupanga…

Ippadi develop aagittu irunthathu antha friendship…eppadinalum koodiya seekiram Sujatha kitta I love you sollidanum nu thonichu Raju ku…. Sari naama Sujatha va photo la paarthirukkom…ava paarthathu illaiye.. paartha accept pannipaala nu doubt irunthathu… but fine…athukku thane chat la strong ah foundation podarom.. manasu level la nammala strength pannikitta, appuram kaadhalukku kann illai ngra formula apply aagi, easy ah avala love panna vaikkalam nu feel pannan Raju.. Sujatha vum was getting very closer to Raju and took rights with him…

Raju: Hey Suju

Sujatha: ennathu ithu Suju, juju nu naaya koopidara maathiri… Sujatha nu koopidu

Raju: ada poppa, Sujatha nu koopita enaku Jeyam la vara Sadha maathiri… nee poyyya poo pooo nu solliduviyo nu thonuthu :D

Sujatha: adinga….. naan enna Sadha va?

Raju: yaaru sonna.. nee Saadhave illae.. nee Special aache

Sujatha: poda vennai

Raju: haiyoo enna ithu da podara pazhakkam..

Sujatha: daa…naan appadi thanda koopiduven da… nee oru dalda :p

Raju: nee da potta, appuram naan dee poduven

Sujatha: po da… naan da poduven..aana nee dee potta… naan enga dadee (daddy) ah koopiduven :p

Raju: apo nan dee pottu koopida koodatha :(

Sujatha: nee dee pottu koopida koodathu….venumna oru nalla Tea pottutu koopidu… good boy la :p


Ippadi jolly ah conversation pogum..Raju was enjoying this a lot….avanukku semma kushi, avan viruppapadiye oru Girl friend, Sujatha kidaichathunala…. Athunala avan thannoda friend Sasi, thangachi Nivetha panninathai kooda maranthuttan…. But still, like bfore, he daily would talk with Nivetha for some time………. Intha pudhu relation pathi avan thangachi kitta manasu vittu pesanum, happiness ah share pannikanum nu avanukku aasai………. But avan “Nivi..naan unkitta oru mukkiyamana vishayatha sollanum nu” aarambichu indha matter ah solrathukku vetkapattu, vaarthaiya kandupidichi solrathukku munnadi anga Gokul will be calling Nivi..so ava “Anna anna oki…. Hold on… I will talk to u later oki….i will listen to this tomorrow.. sorry :D” appadinu phone ah vachiduva… Sari poguthu nu Raju vum vittuduvaan… ippadiye yaarukittayum avan love pathi sola mudiyama poidudhu.

One month later, Raju va oru pudhu project la allocate pannitanga…. Munnadi lam thuru thuru nu velai parka koodiya Raju, one month bench life ku appuram, thuru pidichu pona maathiri aayitan…… laziness pazhagi ponathunala, mind think panrathukke overaa somberi pattukudhu..athuvum illama , avan life la Sujatha vara munnadi, time management avanukku perisa illa… infact konja neram velai paarkama iruntha sema kadi ya irukum… but sujatha kooda friendship develop aanathukku appurama, ava kooda chat panratha thadukkara entha work um avanukku kadi ya therinjathu…. But the faithful guy he is, eppadiyo izhuthu pidichi work pannitu irunthaan… ithe nerathula than Oru naal sujatha, naan oorukku poraen, thirumbi vara 3 days aagum, don’t try to call me.. my parents will scold… tata nu solitu poidara.

It has been 1 week sinc e then.. but there was no sign of Sujatha in the chat.. Raju gets restless.. G-Talk, orkut, ym nu ella idathulayum message vittutan avalukku..but there was no reply from her… avanala intha pirivai thaangikka mudiyalai…. Coz he was so used to sharing his mind with her.. slowly but surely, avan Sujatha vukku, nivetha ku equal ah respect koduthuttu irunthaan….so he was missing her a lot… Ivvalo naal Avala call panni disturb panna venaam nu ninaichaan Raju, but romba naal aayitathala…. Enna aanalum paravalla nu call panraan… .line was engaged.. Raju ku ava kooda pesa mudiyalenu varutham irunthaalum, sari she is active and fine nu nimmathiya irunthan…. Athukku appurama he tries several times later that day…but all the time, the phone line was engaged only…….. Raju ku mild ah oru doubt varuthu…oru velai ava incoming bar panittangala..athan busy ah ve irukko nu ninaikkaran…….. sari nu sollitu, Sujatha voda close friend Indhu ku call panraan… Sujatha has earlier intro-ed her to Raju as her best friend…ava number um raju ku theriyum….

Raju: hello Indhu…. Nan Raju pesaren

Indhu: Hey Raju eppdi irukkae….eppadi poitu irukku work lam?

Raju: am fine am fine… hey indhu… enna ithu, namma Sujatha vukku call panna try panna line eppa paarthalum engaged ah ve irukku

Indhu: hehe enna panrathu po, ava athai payanuku ava ENGAGED aanathula irunthu ava phone line um engaged ah ve irukku……. :)


(To be continued…)

12 comments:

dakaltiz said...

apdi podu aruvaala..!
flow la okie...avlo close a pazhakitu...athai payyan matter epdi velile varala... ? next part la varuma?

Pradeep said...

Haha.. nice turn at the end.. but I was expecting this from the way the story was going. Nice going... waiting to read the ending.

gOOpi said...

nanba.. ithu karpinay kadhiya?? illa ??

ethuva iruntha enna.. padikka nalla iruntha podhum!! keep writing :)

Marutham said...

Sema twist ponga...

Btw, idhu enna kadhaya iruku? :P apdi pata mokka joke'ku elam ponunga madanga matangale... :P
Sari kadhai dhane vidunga vidunga :P

Aduthadhu ennanu waiting... :)

//(To be continued…)// Idha naan edhirparkave ila :P

Karthik B.S. said...

happy deepavali.

Raj said...

story nalla pogudhu! :) Romba overa close aitaangaley, kadhai romba simplea pogaramaadhiri irukke, twist varanumeynu nenachen...athai paiyan vandhu vithai kaatitaan! :D

Btw...pudhu post potuten, apdinu mattum comment vitta podhadhu...enga blog postsayum padichu comment pannanum! :P

Btw...wish you a very Happy Diwali! :)

Raz said...

yeppa... sama mokka

Raz said...

yeppa... sama mokka

prithz said...

Ahaaa!!! Kadaisi line padicha vodane.. edho mega serial ending maadiri iruku!

Andha missed call joke super :P

Aravind said...

aaha.... ipdi oru twist koduthu Raju kattina karpanai kottai ellam destroy panniteengaLae....

me getting orey the doubts now... idhu nejamaave fiction-a? illa mani ratnam iruvar paduthukku munnadi potta madhiri summa perukku oru disclaimer pottu irukeengaLa? :P

Raz said...

ah! nee mathavuinga blog ellam padichi comment kuda poduviya... i thot all u do is go to their blog and comment that u ve written a new post!
athisayama iruku!

Raz said...

//nee ivvlooooo perisaa oru post potta....adhai padikka enakku porumai anniku illa...... //

unna nan padika sollalaiye....

//annniku romba avasaratula irunthaen..athan invitation kodukka pora maathiri ovvoru blog ah poi intha message pottutu irunthaen :D//

avalo avasarathula iruntha en poi msg vidanum? mmmm? venumna... avauingale vanthu padichika porainga????