Thursday, October 11, 2007

Enakkoru Girl Friend venumae - Part II (updated)

Continued from here, I had updated the first part..padicheengala??? poi padichittu :)vaanga :)

(contd...)

Nivetha ippadi sonnavudane Raju ku oru nimisham onnum purilae...he could not believe his own ears….

Raju : (panicky voice la) ennathu…….. ennathu… sollu sollu


Nivetha : annaa… Delhi la irukangala namma Nandhini athai, avanga paiyan, nammaloda cousin Gokul ah naan love panren anna… avanum…cha (blushes) avarum ennai love panraar…. (blushes again)

appadiye 10 atom bomb ah koluthi potta maathiri oru sound..athu onnum illa..Raju voda manasula intha maathiri oru feeling..avan heart la vedicha maathiri...Love…Love… Love…... athe vaarthai… Raju ku English la pidikkathe orae vaarthai… (Author: appo Romance ngra word na pidikkuma apadinu lam no cross qwestions ketka koodathu plz :D, ithu serious ah na situation..so mugatha serious ah vachikittu padinga.. ) ithu varaikkum avan kitta dear ah pazhagina friends elloraiyum avan kitta irunthu separate panna athe love… athe love la ippa avan sister um maatikitta… Raju ku kobam kobama varuthu… aana nivi kitta kobathai eppadi kaatarathu nu avanukku therila….coz He had never been angry with his sister so far... So silent ah irukan..



(after few minutes)

Nivetha : anna….enna sound aeh kaanom


Raju : (grumbles) huhhh......huhhhh....


Nivetha : haiyoo...anna pesunga nu sonna ippadi anaconda effect thareengal.. (chuckles)

Raju : (fuming) nakkala pocha unakku.... neee...

Nivetha : (interrupts) Anna…anna..wait…Looks like Gokul aththan is on call…(blushes) .I will call u later oki…. Sorry so much anna… (blushes) I will call u back… hehehe hehehe…(blushes) Bye anna… (hangs up the call)


Ippadiyaga Nivetha vum call ah cut pannidara. Raju is shaken to the core… What a day it has been for him…… First his best friend Sasi….nethi varaikkum hey machan enna vachan nu kulainjittu irunthaan…. Aana inniku, Call pesittu irukkumbothe, avan sight call vanthavudane, onsite call nu dabaaichutu phone ah cut pannitan…… intha ponnu Nivetha…. Avanoda manasaatchi, avan kooda pirantha thangai…. avaluma love la...My God…avaluma Romance la vizhunthutta… Romance ku spelling kooda theriyadha ponnu athu, English essay la laam Romeo and Juliet fell into Romans nu thathakka pithakka va ezhuthuvaale avala……avaluma kaadhalikkara....Wat a pity, wat a pity....Intha latchanathula avanoda orkut la today's fortune nu soli "you will recieve good news through telephone" nu laam pottirunthaanga....Ithu enna kodumai saravanan.... x-(

Raju over feelings la irunthathala, manasula pesittu irunthathu speaker on panni vittuta maathiri vaarthai veliyave vanthuduthu...avanoda neram..antha time la nu paarthu avanoda PM Saravana kumar antha vazhiya cross panraar... Raju solratha kettutu thannai thaan koopidarano nu ninaichikitu.. "hey raju..watz the matter dude..What u referred as kodumai to me? any probs?" appadinu kettute avan pakkam varaar......Raju avara samalikkarathukkaga pesa aarambikkiran

"athilla sir...ellarum India 20-20 cup ah jeyichathai romba surprised ah perisa solraanga... but namma abdul kalam ithai erkanave predict pannirukaru..athai orutharum kandukka maatengranga illaiya..athai ninaichu than naan apadi sonnen" nu solraan

Saravanan gets surprised.."oh is it...avar predict pannirukara...thatz great..eppo sonnar?" nu aachariyama ketkarar...

Raju "ada aama sir..India will be successful by 2020 nu avar than adikkadi solirukar la...enna oru hyphen ah vittutaru...mathapadi he was just perfect..illaiya sir" appadinu Raju sirichikitte ketkaran. Saravana Kumar ku vantha kaduppu la avar kai la iruntha laptop ah appadiye thooki pottirupar Raju mela...aana Office manners nu onnu irukkarathala control pannikitu, "summa ponavana kooptu mokkai pottu sorinju vittutiyada... iru di..un appraisal la aapu vachu athai aapuraisal aakidaren" nu manasukkula karuvitte vidu vidu nu poidarar antha idathai vittu....

namma hero raju vo Janakaraj style la "sogamana situation la kooda ippadi marana mokkai podariye da..athu eppadi da raju unnala mattum mudiyuthu..ennamo poda raju" appadinu thanakku thaane aaruthal sollitu depressed ah sirichikittae, he returns back to his cubicle

(A Day later…)
Twilight time….Besant nagar beach….Raju was lying on the beach sands near the shore looking at the waves that wetted his knees and went back. Amazing he thought, that simply looking at the waves calms the wavering mind. Probably, seeri paayara alai, alai paayura ennam rendume onna synch aagarathunala irukkalam... Depression in the ocean brings rains...Depression in our mind also bring rains...in the form of tears from our eyes... Hmmm...kodumai….thilo kooda suthittu irukka vendiya vayasula ippadi thaniya philo pesa vachuttangalae...Poor Raju, he had never been to beach alone previously... Chinna vayasula family kooda varuvaan…. He and nivetha would be playing in the beach, running and catching, building castles out of sand, going for a ride in the horse…used to be lots of fun…. Then with his friends group, in school, college and then in work…. Nivetha, whenever she comes to Chennai, pesters Raju to take her to beach… Now he is all alone in the same beach, kadalaiye verichu verichu paarthukittu….. veruppa irunthathu Raju ku…..

Appo some one tapped Raju in his back, Raju thirumbi paarthan…Surprise..surprise…ange ninuttu irunthathu avanoda childhood friend and oru kaalathula avanoda best friend Magi alias Magesh. Raju va porutha varai, Magi than mudhal “dhrogi”…close ah pazhagittu irunthavan, oru lover kidaichavudane, kandukkarathaiye vittutu antha ponnu pinnadiye suthittu irunthavanga list la mudhal aal. He has married her now and kind of settled in life. Appadi patta oruthanai kitta thatta after 2 years paarthathula Raju ku semma santhosam… avan mela kobam irunthalum, ippo irukara mind set la he felt so happy about meeting his pal Magi.

Magi : dei machaan..eppadi da irukae

Raju : fine da…… nee eppadi irukae…un lover..sorry sorry..un wife eppadi irukkanga…

Magi : avalukkenna da she is doing great… nee enna machi thannanthaniya beach la sogamae uruva kadalai paarthuttu irukka…enna kaadhal tholvi ya….

Raju : (depressed smile) :yea yea… Kaadhal tholvi than…. Aana kadhalichathu enna suthi irunthavanga… thothathu mattum naan… athan eppavume oru kootathoda suthittu iruntha naan inniku thaniya suthittu irukkaen :)

Magi : ennada solrae

[Raju explains everything up to Nivetha’s love story]

Magi : hahahaaa

Raju : dei enda ippadi sirikkare..

Magi : sorry da machan… I can’t but help laugh at ur childishness. I can very well understand that you feel lonely without those dears near u. But it is not fair on ur part to be expecting them to be always with you la.. Everyone has a life for their own and sooner than later you will also have one on ur own...

Raju : yea yea I understand all that. I agree marital relation is the most important relation in our life, but there is a limit to everything. I hate this concept of love da…….. stupid thing….It makes the person selfish... Oru proverb solvaanga about Friends, when the whole world steps out, your friend steps in… but intha love vishayatha porutha varai… It is like…When a lover steps in, the whole world literally steps out of that person’s mind.. how mean

Magi : hahaa… machan….true thanda… see.. It is a new relation after all…and it is but human tendency to get all excited about anything new that you experience. And when it is a love relation, the excitement knows no bounds because the very thought that you have got that person to live with your entire life is just amazing u know….

Raju : don’t blabber da… Take the case of my sis…. Chinna ponnu she is….after all… how can u say that she has the capacity to select the person to be with her life?

Magi : nee than da ularure… What is ur sister’s age da… u are 26 now…and she is just 4 years younger than u at 22. She is more than matured enough to choose her life and does not need any guidance in that.

Raju : dei…. How can she da… how can she dare to do such things.. amma appa va mathikkama….ennai.. I have been closer to her than our appa or amma is... I have shared so many things with her, which I have not opened with any one else

Magi : chinna pullaiyaatam pesathe da…. Ellorkittayum consult panitu mudivu edukkarathukku Kaadhal onnum job offer kidayaathu..athu oru feel da… you can never predict when it wud happen inside u, you can never explain that to others at all…. Actually I wud say that ava ippa unkitta sonnathe, because of the respect she has for u than

Raju : cinema dialogue lam nala vidu da nee

Magi : illada, not dialogue, I am telling straight out of my heart.. ippa unakku enna problem un thangai love panrathunala…. Antha paiyan eppadi patta paiyan….

Raju : avan enga cousin thaanda…. distant cousin actually…, Chinna vayasula their family was in chennai only and appa lam vilayada enga veetukku than varuvaan… appuram they moved to Delhi. Recent ah innoru cousin marriage la than romba nalaikku appuram avanai naanga paarthom.. appave avan en thangachiya sight adichittu irunthan. Galatta vittutu irunthaan… pakathula vanthu hello madame nu nivetha paarthu sonnana… nivee ku semma kobam…. Hello sir, I am not madam…call me nivee nu sonna…. Athukku la avan, style ah sirichittu, oh nivi… I said…mah-dame..and not madame…. appadinu sonnan

Magi : hahaa kalakittan po… sari ithelam paarthuttu annan unakku kobam varalai?

Raju : mmm..vanthuchu… but avan intha maathiri dialogue vittavudane Nivetha sirichitta…... as long as it is within limits, my sis does not have any complaints and enjoy such things, antha age kana enjoyment kulla naan interfere panna virumbale

Magi : Great maan… thatz awesome attitude on ur part, i must say…. Sari..avan nalla paiyan thane

Raju : hmm hmm… nalla paiyan than.. Appa IAS officer, amma, athavathu enga athai house wife, orthodox family. Ore paiyan

Magi : pinna ennada un problem… intha kaalathula ponnunga lam kaadhal nu sollitu oor per theriyatha, poruthame illatha pasangaloda suthittu irukkanga..un thangachi theliva mudiveduthu, same caste la, unga family laye select panna epadi select pannuvangalo, avangaloda mind ku pidikkira maathiriyum, athe samayam thannoda manasukku pidicha maathriyum oru paiyanai thane select panniruka.. she shud be congratulated actually. And you and your parents should feel lucky for having a girl like her in ur family..Athai vittutu en feel pannare?

Raju : irunthalum…. I can never accept this (shakes his head)

Magi : u can’t than da….coz you are 26 and innum verumane office poitu, kadamaikku nu velai paarthuttu , veetukku thirumbi vara pullai nee… man..come out of ur shell da..ulagathai suthi paaru… u will get to know how good Love is… machan..Kaadhal onnum ketta vishayam illa...onnu purinjukko… Marriage is inevitable in our life…. We will not be able to select our Parents, we will not be able to select our siblings, and in most cases we will not be able to select our friends also… ithellam thanaa amaiyara uravu.. But for a person we are gonna be with for more than half of our life… angayum, kannai katti nadu forest la kondu poi vitta mathiri thideernu oruthar munnadi nikka vachu, ivanga than un kooda life la vara poranga nu sonna, yosichu paaru… eppadi iurkkum? Namma studies, namma career pathi lam evvalo plan panrom, athe pola thane namma personal life um important...…namma mind ka oruthar mela feel vanthu, ivanga namma kooda vantha nallarukkume nu thoni, avanga mela anbu vachu, avangalaiye life partner aakikittom na life sorgama irukkum :)

Raju : hmmmm

Magi : after all marital life is all about perfect understanding... ivanga than namma vaazhkai thunai rendu peru manasu layum ore maathiri thonarathu rare vishayam machi. And when it does happen, it surely is a bliss…. Not that I am against arranged marriage, but for people with balanced minds, love definitely gives more chance for a better married life :) I do believe nivetha has the perfect mind and thinking... ada ennada unga appa amma voda valarppu pathi enakku irukkara belief kooda unakku illaiye...

Ippadi magesh love ah pathi uyarva pesa pesa, Raju manathil oru maatram…. Face la oru thelivu theriyuthu, and it gets brighter…

Raju : dei magi…….. shit da.. ivlo naal love ah pathi naan thapave than ninaichittu irunthaen..actually nee solrathum, ithu varai en life la nadanthathum vachu paartha……… enaku nee solratha appadiye feel panan mudiyuthu

Magi : (happily smiles) :) cool da, apuram enna anna na latchanama Nivetha voda love ah veetula eduthu solli avalukku green signal vaangi kodukka paaru..athu than ava mela nee vachirukara pasathukku unmaiyana mariyathai :)

Raju : ada athu oru pakkam irukkatum da……… nee sonnathai ketka ketka, enakkula oru feeling…… I think I found what I have missed all thru in life…….. ada enna da….. periya Love… (gets up) Enthiruchitten...itho varen... Naanum panrenda Love-u………….

(To be continued….)
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16 comments:

gOOpi said...

"you will recieve good news through telephone"
-- he he.. athu eppavume thappathaan irukkum..

keep writing!!

Marutham said...

aha seat pocha? :P

Wanted to get first row seat :P
never mind...

I pitty the anna ;) already nanban nogadichutaan...

//qwestions ketka koodathu plz , ithu serious ah na situation..so mugatha serious ah vachikittu padinga..//

OK BOSS>.. ;) Done.

Marutham said...

//Nivetha : haiyoo...anna pesunga nu sonna ippadi anaconda effect thareengal.. (chuckles)
//
kaludha - adi kudukren iru...
evlo serious matter'a soli anna heart'a heavy akitu Joke adikra....

OVER TO ANNA...

Marutham said...

:O
:O
:O

//
Nivetha : (interrupts) Anna…anna..wait…Looks like Gokul aththan is on call…(blushes) .I will call u later oki…. Sorry so much anna… (blushes) I will call u back… hehehe hehehe…(blushes) Bye anna… (hangs up the call)//
Adi p[oduven enna..indha oru adi!!

Ipdi oru manushana nogadiklama??
Yara soliyum kuthamilla... Raju- rombave sellam kuduthu keduthu vechrukeenga.

PS: Love pathi edhum solala...but edhuku evlo importance kudukromnu alavu venum. Anna edho imprtnt'a solanumnangale- mundhiktu nama sonome..shud listen to what he has to saynu yosichurukanum.
Character flaw.... not story! ;)

Marutham said...

@RAJU,

//Nivetha : (interrupts) Anna…anna..wait…Looks like Gokul aththan is on call…(blushes) .I will call u later oki…. Sorry so much anna… (blushes) I will call u back… hehehe hehehe…(blushes) Bye anna… (hangs up the call)//

U said he is ur best friend raju...so dnt jump into conclusion. U never know- oru velai unmaya onsite call'a irukalaam. Suspicion is very dangerous in relationship... :)

AND I DO UNDERSTAND WHAT U R GOIGN THRO... Dnt u worry!

Marutham said...

// Raju solratha kettutu thannai thaan koopidarano nu ninaichikitu.. "hey raju..watz the matter dude..What u referred as kodumai to me? any probs?"//

Dhodaa..peter'ku tamizh pesa varadhu pola! Perappaar saravana kumar!! :P

Marutham said...

@Saravana :P

//"summa ponavana kooptu mokkai pottu sorinju vittutiyada... iru di..un appraisal la aapu vachu athai aapuraisal aakidaren" nu manasukkula karuvitte vidu vidu nu poidarar antha idathai vittu....//
Ippo vardhula... Nama alungalaam tension anaa dhan thaimozhi pakame varanga- adhuvum thaaimozhi enama thandavamaaduthu parunga...:P

Marutham said...

@Raju, :)

// I hate this concept of love da…….. stupid thing….It makes the person selfish... //
Raju... Dnt hate love- as long as i understand. It is these people who have mistake.. Love do not hold in it RULE BOOK - that one shud quit sharing love with all other relations once they fall in love .. It is these immature people who change that way. But on t contrary any relationship would initially need more attention- take a mom & child. Even there t child needs most of the time that t mom has. But it is a mature mind that knows & understands that there has to be a balance. And that this must not isolate from how the life was then.

But to be frank- its the age.. after few years RAJU- wait and watch these people would once again get back to you wanting the same warmth that they had missed all these years. :) You shall wait and watch raju- my words won't turn wrong. With time they will all see what they had done & would want ur love back DESPERATELY !. :)

But pogatum thangai dhane...china ponu kobam vendaam.

Marutham said...

//. Naanum panrenda Love-u………….//

Adha oru velaya aramicha pozhapuku agaadhu raju...
If it happens dnt neglect it- give it a though if that person shud b ur partner to share t time together.

And make sure u dnt do the same mistake ;) others did.

I wish u good luck.

Mystery said...

oye...super po...soo funny...simply love ur narration..n the things said about love hmm personal experience ahhh ;)

@marutham-ippadi neengale ella comment um viteenga na...naanga enna panrathu...:P

Aravind said...

serious story nu sonneengaLe, unga usual mokkai ellaam irukkadhu ne nenachen... :P

padathukku comedy track madhiri adhraiyum kondu vandhuteenga:P
kalakkunga :D

Aaarti said...

Heyy

Sema jollya irukku.. unga writing style rhomba nalla irukku saar... :)

came here thru Pradeeps blog.. nice.. :)

prithz said...

Ellarum poti pootu love pandraanga pa! :D

Mollaiya pizhinju edhutu ipdi mokkai podrela, illa thaana varartha? Andha Romeo Juliet part chanceh illa :D

Btw, on a serious note, Magi's thots on relationship was wonderful. Good job!

Gargling Garbage said...

lolzed a lot bud... and awesome novelty in your narrative style :) waiting for the next post!

btw, am really sorry for replying late to ur comment on my page...

keep writing! :)

rsubras said...

@gopi..
thanks dude...u shud also keep reading :D

@marutham
//Wanted to get first row seat :P
never mind...


adutha post la first row unakku than... ennodathu onum sooper star padam illaiye... fdfs full aaga... low budget than... kaathu than vanguthu u can win the next time :p

aaha.. nalla character analyze panirukke...sooper po...aana raju ku romba sympathy vote vizhara maathiri irukku..wait till the next part :D

@kavitha

//personal experience ahhh ;)

aaha ippadi oru kelvi ketkarathkku ethanai peru kilambirukeenga :p

these are a combo of 2nd, 3rd, 4th hand experiences :)

@aravind

//serious story nu sonneengaLe, unga usual mokkai ellaam irukkadhu ne nenachen... :P

arthama sonnanga periyvanga aazhama sonnanga...athaiye naan thaanga thanni oothi light ah sonnenga :D

wanted to keep things light dude..athukaga mokkai insertion :D

rsubras said...

@aarthi

//
Sema jollya irukku.. unga writing style rhomba nalla irukku saar... :)


hey aarthi..welcome here and thanks... keep coming back :)

@prithz

//Btw, on a serious note, Magi's thots on relationship was wonderful. Good job!

aaaha aaha... va"Sister" vaayal brahmarishi pattam..dhanyan aanen thangaiyae :D

@gargling-garbage

//lolzed a lot bud... and awesome novelty in your narrative style :) waiting for the next post!

hey thanks a lot...welcome here... that was a great encouragin comment.... do visit often :)