Wednesday, September 27, 2006

AUTOGRAPH - Completed :)

Hi All :) Naan eppa intha story aarambichennu unga ellorukkum theriyum :D, ippa than adhai mudikkira velai vanthirukku.... Part I Part II nu vachikkama ore Part ah combine panniruken. Athunala erkanave neenga padichathu marubadi repeat aagum.... :D Also did some editing based on unga feedback... apadi irunthu kooda oru periyyyyyyyyya story ah vanthirukku.... This is also kind of preachy... So please bear :)


Warning : This is not a spoof on Autograph film, although it might appear so,This is more like my earlier post 'J',I am

Warning 2: Of course this story too contains a message and is intended to be preachy




(Location : Egmore Railway station)

Ellorukkum vanakkam... Naan thaanga Gopaalu (ada naan na naan ileenga... intha story's protoganist, avan unga kitta pesuranamam ). konja naal munnadi ennoda personal dairy ah purattitu irunthen ( ada enna ivanukku sontha paal pannai irukko ninaichukatheenga... annan konjam english la weak-u, diary than dairy nu solraaru) thideernu chinna vayasula naan valarntha poongulam gramam nyabagam vanthuchu..andha ooru la than naan 10th varaikum padichen... ippo naan anga than poiyikittu irukkaen.. neengalum vaangalen polaam (ticket lam eduthu kodukka maatanga.."without" la poga aasai irukaravanga kooda ponga)

[toinnnggg.. intha idathula irunthu naan (author) than pesuven... Intro scene paartheenga.. ippo konjam appadiye reverse gear pottu Gopaalu en poongulam gramathuku poran nu paarkalama... "Autograph" padathula Cheran sir, neengalum unga pazhaiya diary, pazhaiya life ah puratti paarunga.. interesting ah irukkum nu sonnar la athula maathiri namma paiyanum diary ah puratti paarthan…eli kadichi vachirunthathu poga micham iruntha pakathula kooda nair kadai la cigarette baaki –ngra maathiri details than irunthuchu…….. Anyway namma hero ku feel aayiduchi.. chinna vayasula sight adicha girl friends avangala paarkanum nu oru aasai... oru Gopika range ku illaenalum Gopi yoda akka range ku yaaravathu love panna kidaikka maatangala nu oru alpa aasai thaan... Chennai la than yaarum thirumbi paarkala....atleast “snehama” pazhaga kooda yaarum kidaikkalae..autograph padathai paarthathula irunthu atleast intha poongulam village la yaavathu try panni paarkalame nu than kilamburan.. Gopaalu appa Post master ah velai paarthathala chinna vayasula niraya gramam la Gopaalu irunthirukkan.. but poongulam gramam than from 5th to 10th padichathunala anga konjam affection jaasthi...]

Poongulam gramam ku vara Gopal nera thannoda friend subbaramani veetukku poran. Athuvum summa illa, hire cycle eduthukittu... (appathane "Autograph" feel kidaikkum)
pogumbothu pazhasellam ninaichu paatu vera paaditu poraan.

"nyabagam varuthe..nyabagam varuthe...
muthan muthalaga arumbiya meesai,
muthan muthalaga eluthiya kavithai"

... ippadinu namma gopaalu aarambicha adutha nimisham ooru provision store ponnambalam odi vanthaaru.. "ey thambi nee gopaalu thaane.. unna paarthavudane nyabagam varuthu... unga apparu (appa) muthan muthala en kadai la vaangina kadan la 500 rs innum baaki..athai eduthu vaichittu nee mela po" appadnu solraru..... ithennada feeling paatu padalam na, pazhaiya vishayam lam velila vanthudum polirukke nu apadiye thannoda volume ah mute pannitu anga irunthu escape aagi subbiramani veetukku varan....

subbiramani veetu pakkathula oru tea kadai la utkarnthu busy ah vadai sappittu ellorkittayum sooda politics pesittu irukaan.. Gopaalu varaan

Gopal : hello neenga thaane subbiramani

subbiramani : aama neenga.....nee...nee....

Gopal : ennada, ennai athukkula maranthuttiya... naan thanda Gopalu...

subbiramani : intha Hongkong, singapore, burma lam poi Gopal pal podi vikkara salesman thaane nee?

Gopal : velakennai..... pazhaiya post master pullai Gopal da nan

subbiramani : adappavi neeya... nee pattinam poi 8 varusham aache da..ippo enga inga...

Gopal : onnum illada..unga elloraiyum paarkanum pola irunthuchu athaan vanthen... eppadi da irukkanga namma friends lam

subbiramani : avanungalukku enna ovvoruthanum appa thozhil layo illena pattinam poi yo pozhappu nadathittu irukkan... naan than onnum sariya amaiyama oorai suthittu irukkaen.. ennai vidu nee enna panre

Gopal : enakkenada....B.E mudichen... ippo aduthu ovvoru technology ah padichittu irukkaen...

subbiramani : velaikku poliya

Gopal : ada, en friends lam infosys, TCS nu periya company la velai parkaranga da... naanum appadi ethulayum po vendama..naanum try pannitu than irukkaen.. but yarum koopda maatengranga…varathellam chinna company ahve varuthu…athaan wait panitu irukaen..

subbiramani : kazhuthai neeyum ennai mathiri velaikku povaama oorai suthittu irukkaen nu decent ah solrennu sollu

Gopal : sari athai vidu..namma kooda 10th la padicha Geetha, Seetha, Mala, Mayuri lam eppadi irukkanga

Subbiramani : ada paavi ada paavi… enda 40 peru iruntha namma class la atheppadi da correct ah 4 ponnunga perai mattum solre.. en athula Eshwari ya mattum vittutae..avala pathiyum ketka vendiyathu thane

Gopal : ada poda, athu ennai vazhinjittu, parkarathukke karuppa irukkum

Subbiramani : aama ivaru periya Madhavan oda machan paaru…… enda dei, Karadi ku shave panni vitta maathiri irukkumbothe nee ivlo pesare… mavane nee mattum konjam nalla irunthutta evlo pesuve….

Gopal : athellam vidu da..poi namma class ponnungala eppadi irukanga paarthuttu varalam

Subbiramani : vaada vaa.. ippadi ethanai peru da kilambirukeenga.....pattanathila irunthu paiyai thookikitu munnadi sight adicha ponnungala paarkurathukku

Gopal : hehe ippothaikku naan mattum thaan da

And so Gopal sets on to see his old Girl Friends along with Subbiramani. Out of the 4 girls Gopal mentioned, Mayuri has left for Mumbai for her higher studies. Mala went to Karumapatti Village after her marriage. Geetha and Seetha live in the same village. So Gopal first goes to Geetha’s house. Angae Geetha voda Aatha velila ninnuttu irukkanga. Gopaalu thannai introduce pannikaran aatha kittae

Gopaalu : Aatha ennai theriyutha.....naan thaan pazhaiya post master pullai Gopaalu...ennai nyabagam iruka...

aathavukku seekiram nyabagam varanumnu "Nyabagam varuthe nyabagam varuthe" tune la oru rendu vari paadaran gopaal..... Tak nu Aatha mugam flash aaguthu

Aatha : nyabagam vanthuduchu pa..unga apparu thaane en mavan enakku anupuna kaasellam surutikittu verum 100 rooba thanthu emaathunavan..nalla nyabagam varuthu

Gopaalu vazhiyaran..athu naan illai aatha... naan vera post master pullai......... (inimel nyabagam varuthe song paadave koodathunu decide pannikaran gopaal)

Gopal : aaatha, geetha eppadi iruka..sowkiyama irukkala?

appo ulla irunthu "Aatha...Aatha" nu oru sweeet voice ketkuthu

Gopal : Aatha is that Geeetha?

Aatha : aama aama ulla than arisi ya sutham panitu irukka... (to Geetha) enna pullae venum?

Geetha : ingana current poiduchi aatha..ore irutta irukku.... mezhugu vathi (candle) iruntha eduthuttu vaayen

Aatha : En thambi govaalu...angana madathula mezhuguvathiyum thee kuchi yum irukkkum..konjam geetha kitta poi koduthudu pa....

Gopalukku semma kushi aayiduthu...aaaha veetukkulaye poi sight adikka oru opportunity athuvum night light effect la nu jolly ah ulla poraan... subbiramaniyum kooda varan

gopal : dei nee engae da vara... inga naan than hero....... nee verum sidekick..side la ye othungikko..nan en devathaiya paarthuttu varen...

subbiramani : paarthu paarthu...aasaiya pesara aatha kaiyila aruva manaiyum irukkku..jaakirathai

Gopal : ellam theriyum..nee gammunu iru

Ipadi sollitu aasai aasai ya ullae poraan Gopaalu….paatu vera intha situation ku

“Oliyile…… therivathu……. devathaiya……..devathaiya…..”

Paadikitte candle ah light panitu room kullae porana…candle light la Geetha va paarkaran… 1 second than… Azhagi hero range ku ulla vanthavan…… Chandramukhi Vadivelu pola mugam maaruthu….. Orey ottam thaan… subbiramani ya iluthukitta Aatha kitta kooda oru vaarthaiyum sollama vanthudaran…

Subbiramani : dei machi ennada aachi, en ippadi ennaiyum iluthutu vanthutte?

Gopal : podaanga… Chinna vayasula Picassa oviyam maathiri iruntha Geetha ippa Pisasu maathiri irukka da, Karuppa..Gundaa

Subbiramani : athai solravan nee Ajith maathiri iruntha naan accept pannikuven… neeye Thar tin ku pant potta mathiri irunthuttu oru ponnai pathi ippadi pesalama?

Gopal : athukilleda, etho oru nappasaiyila sight adikkalam nu oorula irunthu vanthen. Ippa kooda onnum illa… naama poi Seetha va paarkalam…en Seetha chinna vayasulaye semmma cute ah iruppa
Subbiramani : dei nee dharma adi vangama oor thirumba porathillae ninaikkaren

Gopal : sari thaan vaada

(Ippadiyaaga rendu perum Seetha veetukku poraanga.. anga oru Amma oru kudam thanni ya kashtapattu sumanthukittu irunthaanga…Gopal poi ketkaran)

Gopal : Aunty…nalla irukeengala? Ennai nyabagam irukka naan than Gopaal….unga ponnu Seetha voda chinna vayasu la onna padichen…. Seetha irukkala aunty veetu la?

(antha Aunty mugam bright aaguthu………)

Aunty : Gopaalu…….. neeya da………. Nalla paaru……. Naan than da Seetha………

(1000 voltage Shock adicha maathiri aaguthu Gopal ku, athirchi la vaarthaiye varalae…)

Gopal : Neenga..neenga…I mean..nee Seetha va………. Sowkkiyama irukkiya….naan…naan avasarama oorukku poitu irukkaen….. train pidikkanum…bus stand poraen…hehee

(asadu vazhiyara gopal etho ularittu Subbiramani ya kootikkitu antha idathula irunthu escape aayidaran)

Subbiramani : enna machi, un Seetha veetukku ullaye pogama odi vanthutte ;)

Gopal : podaa paavi……. En da en da ippadi… School padikkumpodhu eppadi iruntha ponnunga ipa ippadi aayitaanga……

Subbiramani : sari free ya vidu, gramam na appadi ippadi than irukkum….. sari vaa namma veetukka polaam

Gopal : naan engayum varala da..naan oorukku vantha purpose eh total damage aayiduchi….naan oorai paarthu kilambaren……. Tata……..

Subbiramani : aama…ivaru Peace treaty sign panna vanthaaru……. Purpose damage aayiducham..sari than naaye vanthu saptutu po

Gopal : naan varala da… kilambaren

(ippadiye pesikittae nadakkarangala……. Oru theru pakkam varaanga..athula rendavathu veetai Subbiramani kaaturan)

Subbiramani : dei dei machi…… intha veetula yaaru irukkanga theriyuma…. Eashwari da…… avalaiyum paarthudalama?

Gopal : poda naan intha vilayaatukke varala……… Azhagana Ratchasi ya iruntha ponnungalae ippa athu la paathi than unmaiya Ratchasi pola irukkanga…. Eashwari chinna vayasulaye karuppa than iruppa….. avala ippa paarthenna appuram enaku veppilai than adikka vendi irukkum…naan odaren oorukku

(As Gopal attempts to run, antha veetukku ullae irunthu oru ponnu varuthu……. Bharathi raja padathula duet ku naduvula hero heroine ah suthi ring-ah ring-ah roses aaduvangalae…athu pola oru angel dress la Eashwari velila vara]

Gopal appadiye stun aagi nikkaran…….. “ennangada ooru ithu… azhaga iruppanga nu ethir paarthu vantha ponnunga lam bayanthu odura maathiri irukanga…. Chinna vayasula ye oru type ah iruntha ponnu ippa angel maathiri irukku”

Subbiramani : Hey nee Eashwari thane

Eashwari : Aamanda subbuni..naane than……. Ithu Gopal thane…….en ivan seivinai vachi vitta mathiri muzhikkaran

Gopal : hehehe athillae Eashwari…… ippa ivvalo fair ah irukkara nee..chinna vayasula karuppa gunda.. I mean…….

Eashwari : yea yea puriyuthu … mela sollu

Gopal : epadi intha maayam… Ethuna fairness cream thadaviniya?

Eashwari : eppa paarthalum padam, advertisement intha maaya ulagathula irunthu velila vara maatiya…anni ku irunthu inni varaikkum nee thirunthave ilae Gopalu

Gopal : sari athai vidu………. Andru illatha matram unnathu…athu epadi unnidam vanthathu?

Eashwari : solren solren….. chinna vayasula nee sonna maathiri karuppa, gunda, ennai vazhinjittu iruppaen illiya…appa laam enakku thaazhvu manapanmai niraya irukum… Naan mattum asingama irukkane nu….. ennai naan care eduthukavae maaten…. Intha moonji ku powder potta mattum aishwarya rai maathiri aayiduvena nu ninaichikittu ethuvume panika maaten… dress, make up ippadi ethulayum gavanam selutha maaten…appuram thaan oru naal ennoda pazhaya photo vum pudhu photo vum vachu paarkum bothu onnu gavanichen. Ennoda pudhu photo compare pannumbothu pazhaya photo la naan konjam nalla irunthen nu…. Appo thaan enakku purinjathu……. Ennai naane kandukkama vittathala naan oru naalukku oru naal innum asingam aayitu varennu…. Make up pannikarathu, mugatha kazhuvarathu ithelam nethikku irunthatha vida konjam better ah iruppen…atleast nethikki vida inniku asingama aaga maaten nu therinjathu… So anni la irunthu naan ennoda azhagai gavanichukka aarambichen. Ennnoda target ippo aishwarya rai yavo illa adutha veetu aaya vo ila…nethikku iruntha naan..athai vida inniku azhaga irukkanum nu aim panninen..intha maathiri panna panna ennoda confidence valara aarambichathu….. ennalayum azhaga irukka mudiyum nu nambikkai vara aarambichathu….

Gopal aachariyama kettukittu irukkan

Eashwari : Vetri ngarathu aduthavangala race panni jeyikarathu illa…nammale naamale daily better ah vachikarathu nu therinjukittaen..athan oru nalaikku oru naal improve pannitu irukkaen..eduthavudane perusa poganum nu ninaikkama chinna chinna vetriya thedi appadiye develop pannikitaen..avlothaan 

[ Vikraman pada heroine range ku lecture edutha Eashari sirichikitte thannoda veetukku ulla poidara ]

Subbiramani : Dei innum en oorukku poganum nu parakkare..enga veetukku vanthu oru vaai saptutu po

Gopal : illada maaple, Eashwari en kannai thiranthutta..ivlo naal periya company vantha mattum than aim pannanum nu vettiya irunthen naan… ini mel chiruso peruso vaazhkai la eppavum munnerite irukanum nu enakku purinjiduchi…….. nalaiku oru chinna company la interview ku koopiturukkanga..naan athukku poganum……… varttaaa?

- SUBAM -
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12 comments:

Ravi said...

good ending though a bit predictable. Neway nice story

Anonymous said...

Machi... ipdi message solli nenja nakkitiyeeeeeeeee.....

"Aatha is that Geeetha?" is the best...

Karthik B.S. said...

yepppppppppaaaaa evalo periya Story!! Porumaiya padichu appurama comment panren! Adhu varaikum vanakkam koori vidai peruvadhu ungal Karthik. :)

aks said...

subu, good ending and nalla message. esp last 2 dialogues by easwari...

Neethi said...

The idea behind the story is an age-old one. Aana we foolishly just overlook some things in life. Very nicely put.

Anonymous said...

yalo!!! ippodaiku, karthik maadiri attendance pootukarean...konjam busy wid exams and music concert... kadaisi dialog mattum padhichen... yeannkitta sonnadha vida, kadhaila edho chng panna maadiri irruke...will read n comment later... tata!

Aravind said...

kalakkal.. seetha episode was the best!!! :))
Last la msg vera!!! :D Oscar ku anuppalaama?!!

Karthik B.S. said...

what happened to ur blog template? Oruey plaina irukku?

Karthik B.S. said...

ahaaaa nalla message!
Idhu fair and lovely company madhri advert. pannaravangalukku oru padama irukkum!

Krithika said...

sorry..I the late!
aAhaaaa,,pullu arikithu..but nice msg
idhu nalla irukku :

subbiramani : intha Hongkong, singapore, burma lam poi Gopal pal podi vikkara salesman thaane nee?

Gopal : velakennai..... pazhaiya post master pullai Gopal da nan

Subbu said...

Kalakals machi..

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