Tuesday, April 03, 2007

Kindly bear with Me

* Update - Changed the title of the post :D for the post.

General P.S : Hi all vanakkam... Erkanave birthday anniku first part post panninen..apuram mind thought odave ilae... oru vazhiya inniku than mudikka mudinjathu :D.. Thanks to my friend Dominic for patiently listening to me and making the flow in my thought normal :).thanks da

Story's P.S : Actually intha kadhaikku "Kindly bear with me" apadinu than title vachen..appuram than thonichu ipathan tamil naatula mudhalla english la jore ah title vachittu apuram tamil la padutharangale..i mean tamil padutharangale.. infact appadi panna than sentiment ah padam hit aaguthu...so athe sentiment padi naanum tamil paduthitten :D.... namma blog um hit aava vendaamungala :D.. sari sari romba logic idikkkuthu nu thonichuna we can add a tag line like this... "Anbana karadi engalidam ullathu" - The tamil of "Kindly bear with me" a.l.a K.S.Ravikumar style in naming Varalaru


Warning 1: ithu romba periya kadhai..... :D

Warning 2 : Ithu comedy kathai illa... ithula karuthellam vera solliruken :D


ANBANA KARADI ENNIDAM ULLATHU

[The Tamil of "Kindly bear with me"...]


"ding..dong...ding..dong.....ding dong...dinggggg"

calling bell was ringing continuously as Aasha was lazily getting up from her afternoon nap and opened the door. Raju, her elder brother, who kept on pressing the calling bell came inside.

"Ennada Raju avasaram...... I will come na........ yahoo messenger la un girl friends ah buzz panra maathiri adichitte irukkae........ Heck...the shriek of this calling bell sound is annyoing...It makes me go crazy..." remarked Aasha chidingly......

Raju, "huh...pinna un mobile ringtone maathiri ethuna cinema paatu calling tone ah podalama"

Aasha, "podalam..podalam..appadi podaratha iruntha.........."Daai kaiya vachittu summa iru da" song than podanum unnai maathiri vidama calling bell adikkara pasangalukku"


Raju, "Podhum podhum loosu, enna pannitu irunthae ivlo neram... you took hell a lot of time to open the door"

Aasha..."Dei anna..nee than looosu..you very well know Saturday afternoon 2 pm is your sister's sleeping time. nee spare key eduthutu poirukanum..ippadi vidama noi noi nu adichu en thookathai kedukarathuku bathila...."

Raju, "nalla thoongine po.... sari ammavum appa vum eppo varuvanga"

Aasha "yarukku theriyum.... chithi veetukku poirukkangalla.... oor vambu adikka aarambicha rendu perukkum neram porathe theriyathu...avanga eppa venaa varatum.. sappadu eduthu vachirukken..vanthu kottikka va.."

Raju, "hey Aashuu... I am eight years elder than you.... Annanukku konjamavathu mariyathai thaama kannu..."

"sari than vaada erumai maadu" nu sollite sappadu eduthu vaikka dining hall pora Aasha....

"ithuku mela pesuna total damage dhan." appadinu Raju mute mode ku poitu Aashava follow panni dining room poraan....

(Dining hall....... )

Aasha sappadu eduthu vaikkara. Raju sappida utkaruran.....

Aasha : Dei anna, neeyum un friend um etho oru ponnai correct panna poreenga nu sollitu camera lam eduthuttu poneenga kaalaila…. Antha matter enna aachu?

Raju : shhh..nee chinna ponnu ithellam un age ku athigamana vishayam.. naanga paarthukarom athai...

Aasha : ada summa sollu pa... neenga pana tricks lam therinju vachikitta un thangachi naan usharaa iruppen paaru..athukku than sonen

Raju : nee thaan KD aache... unakku enna problem varum.....

Aasha : sari athai vidu, nee matter ku va..kaalaila poneengalae antha kadhai enna aachu....

Raju : Hmmm..hmmm antha sogatha en ketkara........athai naan solratha vida en Friend Prem konja nerathula camera va vaangitu poga varuvan..avane sonnathan nalla irukkum…

( Raju avanoda camera va eduthu athula iruntha flash ah kalatti athai reverse side face panra maathiri thirumba vaikkaran)

Aasha : dei anna..enna panre?

Raju : FLASH BACK sollaren avan varathukku munnadi…appathan unakkum oru context kidaikkum nanga solla pora matter ku

Aasha : (thalai la adichikittu) kashtam....sari sollu.....

(Five days earlier)

Raju, Prem, Sunil and Sundar in a Juice shop. Sunil was giving treat that day bcoz his aalu talked with him that day during DBA class. Avan kitta Pen kadan vanginaalam...Athukkku avvalo guthichitu irunthan Sunil… College la than yaaruna ethuna chinnatha santhosa patta kooda enda santhosa pattom nu avanga nogara alavukku Treat kettu konnuduvangalae.. So antha principle padi Sunil santhosathukku aapu vaikka avanai treat kodukka vachittanga Sunil's other three close friends.

(Sunil juice vaangi ellorukkum kodukkaran. Sundar ku oru sip juice kudichavudane mugam maaruthu)

Sundar : Dei machi ithu enna juice da......... ippadi gabbadikkuthu

Sunil : therilae da maaple, etho oru pazharasam nu sonnaru annnachi..... nallarukkum nu vanginen

Raju : nalla visarichiya? pazharasam nu sollirukka maataru.. pazhaiya rasam nu sollirupparu..antha taste than varuthu ithu la

Sunil : sari sari adjust pannikoda, en budget udhaikkuthu..paaru namma P.Chidambaram budget la ella price aiyum ethi vittutaru ...... :D

Sundar : athunala unakenada..un item, naai biscuit ku than avar vari ya kuraichirukkla..un buvva vukku entha problem um illa :p

Sunil : Dei (aavesama muraikkiraan)

Prem : Sari sari paavam paiyan free ya viduda..adutha maasam en birthday varuthulla..appo party koduthu jamaikkiraen....... all of you be ready

Raju : kalakkare machi........... Sundar lam avanoda bday anniku oru cutting ku erpaadu panna sonna kooda, 15 Rs mattum koduthu hair cutting panniko nu thurathi vittuduvan...kanjambatti..nee ennadanna birthday anniku beer lam adikka solrae...

Sunil : Dei dei adangu da....... avan thayara iru nu sonnan... unakku ennada na beer adi more adi nu ketkuthu

Raju : ennadhu? thaayara va? u mean mother?

Sundar : machi avan dhan mokkai nu theriyum la free ya vittudu... mela mela pesittu iruntha kadiche kuthariduvan.

Sunil : aamanda ivan lollukku alave illa....anniku namma Gopal um naanum enga veetu la chess aaditu irunthom..antha paiyan ennoda ovvoru pawn ah strike pannitu irunthana.. ivan ketkiran... ena machi pawn ah mattum kuri vachu adikkirae nee enna pawn broker ah nu.......... anniku ponavan dhan aduthu en veetu pakkame thalai vachi padukkale (Everyone laughs)

[ Cut to the present]

(haiyo haiyo haiyo nu Aasha thalaila adichikkara)

Aasha : Eh loosu Raju anna, etho Prem, avanoda girl friend kathaiya solren nu aarambichittu, nee potta mokkaiyellam alli vittutu irukkae..athan daily en kitta solli kazhutharukkariye podhadha....... ithu varaikkum nee sonnathula entha ponnum entry kooda aagale.........

Raju : Heylo sister, ivalo periya vishayatha appadiye tak nu sollida mudiyuma.... konjam spice lam add pannathan intha comedy track.....

Aasha : thuu...... ithu peru comedy ah..nee than mechikkanum... marana mokkai ithu, flash back sollu da na veri nai maathiri kadikkaran

Raju : Hello, padathula mattum flashback sollumbothu kuthu paatu, vadivelu comedy track lam podaranga...athai mattum kelvi ketkama rasikareenga....... athu maathiri naan oru serious matter sollumbothu konjam relaxation ku ipadi solren......... sari sari muraikkathe matter ku varen

Aasha : mm..seekiram sollu.........

[ Again to the same scene, Five days earlier, The guys were still laughing, and finish after some time ]

Prem : dei Sunil,Sundar, Raju enga appa bank la oru velai sonnaru..nan kilambaren sariya

Sunil, Sundar and Raju : ok machi see u later

Prem avanoda bike niruthi vachirukkara idathuku poran... avan bike la yaaro avanga college bag ah vittutu poirukkanga.. Prem gets angry....

Prem : What the heck............ evan da intha bag ah inga vachathu

(kobama antha bag ah eduthu thooki podarathukku veesarana...... appo oru sweet voice, Kindly Bear with me*, appadinu solluthu... thirumbi paarkuran Prem...angae oru azhagana ponnu, fairy maathiri white dress lam, athuvum henko washing powder la thuvaicha white dress la nikkuthu)

Girl : Kindly Bear with me* sir....athu ennoda bag than sir.......... Sorry inga oru kadaikku ponena athan bag ah vachittu ponen.. I am very sorry sir, very sorry

Prem ukku oru second onnume purila...... pinnadi Rango Rangoli appadinu BGM lam oduthu... road la poitu iruntha ponnungallam thideernu white dress pottutu dham dhana dham dhana nu dance aadara maathiri oru feeling...enna pesarathu ne therila

Prem : it..it..itz ok......oooook........... okkaaaay.......

antha ponnu Thank u sir, appadinu oru cute smile vittutu pora.... Prem antha ponnaiye vacha kann vangama paarthuttu irukkan...... BGM paatukku odikittae irukku.... avala paarthukittae nadakkarana.....slight ah slip aagi thannoda bike mela vizharan...avan kai indicator la pattu andha indicator light right side eriyuthu.....athe direction la than antha ponnum nadanthu pora............ Mozhi pada style la bulb um erinjavudane Prem ku semma happy aayiduthu...ival than ennaval...ithai antha aandavane indicator pottu indicate pannitaaru nu feel panran...

(Cut to the present)

Raju : ithu than anniku nadanthuchu...naalu naala ore pinaathal than antha Prem paiyan, avan en aalu, en manasu solluchu iva than nu, aandavane bulb eriya vachaaru appadinu.... avan nacharippu thangama inniku kaalaila ponom marubadi athe juice shop kitta naanum..Prem um antha ponnai thedi...

Aasha : oh....antha ponnu pathi ethum visaricheengala

Raju : mmm..mm..vera ena velai antha paiyanukku naalu naala.... full details collect pannirukkan...ava peru Akshaya vam... orthodox family pola irukku... naanga padikkira athe college la than intha ponnum padikkira..ore oru akka..avangalukku ippa than mappilai parkirangalam..

Aasha : hahaha, last year mini project paneengalae..athai pathi ennikana details collect panirukeengala.... ponnu pathi na mattum history geography ellam finger tips la vachupeenga...

Raju : hehe athellam kandukka kooodathu........

Aasha : sari athai vidu...... inniku kaalaila enna nadanthathu.... nondhu noodles ah vantheengalae..antha details ah solu...antha ponnu inikum vanthaacha?

Raju : mmm athu inniku enna aachu na....

(Just then Prem enters Raju's house)

Raju : itho paaru hero sir eh vanthuttaru...avan kittaye kettukko

Aasha : Prem anna, vaanga vaanga...inniku kalaila neenga pona matter enna aachu sollunga na

Prem : dei looosu..namma matterlama thangachi kitta solvanga.... en image ah damage panrathe unakku velaiya pochu da

Raju : illena mattum unnai pathi theriyatha enna... en thangachi unakku enna peru vachirukka theriyuma... Train nu...

Prem : Train na?

Raju : aama nee eppavum dhum adichittu pugai vittute iruppiyae... pugai vandi nu solrathukku Train nu solra

Prem : aaha enna Aashuu... ippadi damage panrae

Aasha : sari sari vidunga.... inniku kaalaila nadantha matter ah sollunga.. Raju 5 nalaikku munnadi nadantha mudhal santhippu lam sollitan..detailed ah........so u can continue the today's story

Prem : adapavingala... ennai vachu oru padame edupeenga polirukke... Udhaar - Ek Prem kadhaa nu

Raju : sari sari feeling aagama solllu

Prem : hmm hmm solren.......

(Flash back again this time to that day's morning)

Scene : The same juice shop

Raju : Dei oru saturday nimmathiya veetula thoonga vidariyada.....nacharichu nacharichu inga vara vachitte..un sight ah paarkarathu nan ethukku da

Prem : appadi illada, unna maathiri oruthan pakathula iruntha than naan azhaga therivaen....

Raju : Dei....... thevai da enakku ithu....podangg

Prem : sari sari kandukkathe machi....... Paarthiya 3 azhagana roses.....ithukku enna artham sollu

Raju : 3 roses...appadina tea nu artham.... manam, thidam, suvai

Prem : un mandai... poda mokkai... I love u nu artham da..ithai kondu poi en devathai kita koduthu asatha poren paaru

Raju : eppadi da ava vaangippa nu ninaikkare?

Prem : poda anniku ava ennai vitta look=u, kilambi ponavudane kooda thirumba thirumba paarthutte ponaa da....enakku pathikichu na avalukkum kandipa pathikittu than irukkum

Raju : enakku than ippo vayiru pathikittu varuthu...unnoda nonsense ah paarthu

[ At that moment Akshaya comes that way.. Prem gets too much excited.... Rose boquet eduthuttu vegama odi poi ava munadi smile pani boquet ah neetarana...Akshaya kandukitta mathiriye therila..... Smile kooda pannama mugatha thannoda i-pod la paatu kettukittae pora... Bulb vaangara Prem vida muyarchiyoda marubadi fast ah nera odi oru U-turn eduthu opposite side la irunthu vara maathiri varan..vanthu ava munnadi again antha boquet ah neetaran..... enna than veerama pesunaalum kodukkumbothu sema tension Prem mugathula.... ava enna solla poralo, eppadi react pana poralo nu... Tension oda neetarana.... enna aachariyam.... Akshaya antha roses ah sirichikittae vaangikara]

[Cut to current scene]

Aasha : Ennathu vaangikittala.......wow Prem anna u are great.... congrats

Raju : cha cha niruthu niruthu...... kadhaiya full ah kelu.. nee sollu da machi

[ Back to flashback]

Roses ah vaangara Akshaya, athai vaangittu, thannoda purse la irunthu oru 100 Rs note eduthu Prem kitta koduthu.. "intha thambi vachukko.. Keep the change" appadinu sollitu vidu vidu nu poidara........ Semma bulb vaangitu parithabama nikkaran Prem... irunthalum vidama avala thurathi poi pesa try panran

Prem : Hello hello execuse me Akshaya

Akshaya : (i-pod ah pause panitu) Yes??... do u know me?

Prem : ennathu....... helllo.... athukkula maranthutiya ennai.....

Akshaya : Mister.... i dont know who you are...aana avoid this nee va po.... First learn to give and take respect..understand??

ippadi sollitu marubadi i-pod earphones ah maatikittu kilambidara

[ Cut to current scene ]

Prem : ithaan nadanthuchu...podhuma?

Raju : ada ada ada ennama bulb vaanginan theriyuma.... bulb erinjathu, love vanthuchu nu sonnappa naan nambala..athu enna maathiri bulb nu enakku inniku kaathala than purinjathu (giggles)

Prem : dei dei asinga paduthathe...naan enna panrennu mattum poruthirunthu paaru

Raju : enna panna pore?

Prem : vida maaten avala... evlo thimir iruntha appadi alatchiyama bathil sollitu poiruppa.... eppo indicator avalai kaatucho appave decide panniten ava enakku than nu.... eppadiyavathu I will make her love me... nanba ithu un mela aanai

Raju : (Shock aagaran) aamanda aanai kuthirai nu solitu nee poiduve... Vathal maathiri nee irukae.. athu Mittal veetu ponnu maathiri irukku...athu unnai thirumbi paarkuma... ithula en life ah vera en risk la vaikkarae

Prem : illa machi..yosi da.. it is not fair da...vera ethukkume vendaam...namma college junior ava, senior nu venaam, anniku avlo pesinaale, inniku oru bit ore oru bit kandukittu irunthirukkalam..it is not at all fair, nan konjam karuppa, middle class ah irukkaennu sollitu thane kandukkama poraa..ithe A/c car vachittu evanavathu vantha oc la niraya vangi kodupan nu vazhinjittu irunthirupa

Raju : ippa ennandre..apadiye ava unna pona poguthunnu love pannalum ava vera caste pola irukkae da.

Prem : so what, avanga akka ku mappilai thedarappo kodutha newspaper ad ah paarthen...athula avanga apa Caste no bar appadinu potirukaru..so he wont mind

Raju : poda, naan visarichen ithai pathi.... avanga appa konjam kanjam pola... Mappillai same caste ah irukanum, athe samayam kudi pazhakkam irukka koodathu, athavathu BAR uku pogathavana irukkanum nu Caste, No BAR..appadi nu pottirukaram...

Prem : heck...so what...eppadiyavathu avalai correct panren

Raju : enna panna pore sollu?

Prem : First, inniku antha music channel ah lovers ku nu oru program podarangale...athukku phone panni akshaya than en lover..we are eternal lovers nu koluthi poda poraen... intha maathiri eve teasing panrathukkellam vasathiya program vachirukkanga antha music channel la...athai use pannika poren

Raju : ada ppavi.....

Prem : college la, avalukku therinjavanga side la gossip pathikkum...appuram daily antha music channel ku i love u akshaya appadi ippadinu nijamma irukkara maathiri sms kodupen..avanga veetula yum enna ethu nu kettu pressure kodukka aarambichiduvaanga... oru kattathula avale vanthu en kaalila vizhanum.....

(ithelam silent ah kettukittu irukkara Aasha, pesa aarambikkara)

Aasha : Prem anna onnu sollunga.... not fair not fair nu sonneengalae... anniku oru naal unga oor larnthu unga la paarkanumnu unga athai ponnu sevvanthi vanthappo, ava kannula pada koodathunnu veetu pakkame pogama iruntheengale..athu entha vithathula fair?? appo unga fairness ellam depends on how fair a girl is ah?

Prem : athu..athu... pazhagara ponnu azhaga irukkanum nu ninaikkarathula enna thappu

Aasha : aaha...appo unga kitta enna thaguthi irukku? dark complexion, college la 5 arrears, thanni dhum ella pazhakkamum irukku.... what qualities u have?

Prem : hello..hello......aambilai nu oru thaguthi irukku la.. athu podhum....u shut up...

Raju : dei ennada en thangachi ya mirattara?

Aasha : anna anna, wait, naan deal pannikaren...... Enna prem anna soneenga... aambilai ya..neengala......ha ha ha ha

Prem : En sirikkare?

Aasha : naan sila kelvigal ketkaren... kobapadama bathil solreengala

Prem : hmm...kelu..kelu..kettu paaru

Aasha : Aambilaina verum gender la male ah iruntha matum podhadhu....ethaiyum nerukku nera face panra thairiyam irukanum, manasula veeram irukkanum

Prem : velai seiya theriyalennu sonna velai senju kaatalam, padikka theriyalennu sonna padichu kaatalam

Raju : enga nalla padichu intha sem ella arrears um clear pannu paarkalam

Prem : shooo dialog pesumbothu thontharavu panna koodathu...aambilai ilainu sonna ena seirathu

Aasha : sari naane ketkaren...ithu varaikum veerama enna senjirukeenga...... footboard la thongarathu, college la ungala vida juniors ah miratarathu, valaiyam valaiyama pugai vidarathu ithellam pannita aambilai aayida mudiyuma?

Prem : pinna ena panna solre? antha kaalam maathiri maatai adakki, kuthirai yai adakki aambilai nu prove panna solriya

Aasha : yes yes eggjactly...

Prem : huh....dei Raju ennada un thangachi ivvalo pattikaada irukku...... Aasha kannu.... athellam makkal kaatu mirandiya iruntha kaalathula panna oru cruel game...

Aasha : but you are missing a crucial point here anna... antha kaalathula bulls, horses lam en adakka sonnanga..athai adakkinathan veera aanmagan, avanukku than ponnu nu en sonnanga...... oru murattu kaalai yum murattu kuthiraiyum adakkarathu onnum easy velai illai... chumma body valarthu muscles vachittu iruntha matum podhadhu..lavagama athai handle panni control ku keezhe kondu varanum....

Prem : sari athukku

Aasha : athai oru aambilaiyala physical ah panna mudinjathu na, antha bull, horse lam vida fierce and powerful ah irukara namma manasu thoughts ah yum easy ah handle pannalam... vaaliba vayasila romba active ah manasu irukkum..ethetho panna sollum..athula nalathavum irukum, thappavum yosikkum...athai athoda pokkula vidama control panrathu kashtam.... oru murattu kuthiraiya adakka therinjavanukku thannoda murattu manasukkum kadivalam poda kandipa theriyum.. antha maathiri thannaiye than control vachukkitu entha problem um bold ah face panna therinjavanthan aambilai

Prem : ??????

Aasha : athaiyellam vittutu pathu paisa prachinaikku baynathuttu athai marakka thanni adikkarathu, konja nera kulir kooda thaangikka mudiyama dhum adikkarathu..epavum ponnunga namma kitta bayanthukitte irukkanum nu ninaikkarathu, konjam smart ah oru ponnu irunthutta, avalai direct ah face panna thuppu illama avaloda weak point ah vachi exploit panna paarkarathu...ponnu kooda prachinai vanthuchuna athai nerukku ner handle pannama force moolam avalai paniya vaikka ninaikarathu.....ippadi thannoda unarvugaloda weakness ah kooda sari pannika theriyama irukarathu, ithaiyellam pannitu yaaruna kelvi ketta naan oru aambilai nu thimira pesarathu, oru unmaiyana aambilai panra vishayam illai... ethaiyum face panna thairiyam ilatha oru kaiyalagathavan nu artham

(appadiye palar palar nu arainja maathiri oru feeling Prem ku...ena pesarathu theriyama thadumaruran)

Prem : athu sari...aana

Aasha : enna na aana aavanna... neenga mattum oru ponnukku azhagu irukanum padippu irukanum nu ninaikkalam, aana oru ponnu pasanga kita smartness irukkanum, vasathi irukanum ethir paarka koodatha...ennangada nyayam ithu

Prem : (gathi kalangi nikkaran) Dei machi...anna nu solli thanda solra aaana mothama kaari thuppitta.. nee solrathu la ula nyayam puriyuthu..irunthalum enakku ippa ena solrathu ne therila...... S.J.Suryah padam paarthu veena poitu iruntha enna bharathiraja voda pudhumai pen padam paarka vacha maathiri pannite aasha......

Raju : machi... S.J.Surya padathukum Bharathiraja padathukum rende rendu quotes thaanda vithiyasam.

Prem : ennadhu da adhu

Raju : Bharathiraja padathula A film by BharathiRaja nu solluvanga..adhe S.J.Suryah padam na "A" film by S.J.Suryah nu solvanga

Prem : aarambichuttiya mokkaiyai...aalai viduda saami naan odaren..... Aasha....nee sonna mathiri inimel naan unmaiyana aambilaiya irukka try panren..vartta.....

Aasha : ok na byee... :)

- SUBAM -

* - Eppadi title ah kondu vanthom la kathaikkulla :D
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20 comments:

Chriss said...

Makkalae ungalukku oru unmai solliyae theeranum , indha storyla actual cahracteraana prem namma subbu oda vaazhkaiya thazhuvi vandhadhu....

vazhakkam poela sabaash solla vachiteenga.. aasha solra ovvoru matterum viral nagakanla oosi yaethra maathri irukku, prem maathri , oru ponnoda manasa purinjikaama edhaiyum seyyalaamnu nenaikra pasangalukku idhu serupadi .. flat heel seruppula illa pointed heels la adichu irukka namma aasha chellam...

prithz said...

Atlasttt!!! Super story! Initially, i thought you were going to target tv channels that come up wid these personal msg dedication.. but the story took a different turn.. Deep ah analyse panni ezhutirkinga.. super :)

anuradha said...

subbu...
romba nalla irundudu...good message.
ana aabalai na ippadithan irukanum, pombalainga na ippadithan irukanum...nu onnume illa...rendu inamume ozhunga irukanum...

barbi said...

heh mams

reduce the size of the post, i m not able to read the post fully.

as far as i read, it was tooooooooo good.

Karthik B.S. said...

romba naal kalichi inga vandhurkaen. Hmm.. ivalo periya postaaaa? Appalika padikraen! :)

fun2fun said...

Happa.. padichu mudichuten.. idhuke unga kitta oru treat vaanganam :P
neways, scene a ezhudhirukinga... facts of life... naatula nadakaradha nalla puttu puttu vechirukinga :)

Ramya said...

Ammmmaaaaaaadiii
Evlo periya post ! (read in Devyani style)
sathyama naa padikala fulla !

nivi said...

Ha...that was super long!! anyway finished reading it...nice :).
But just a thing with the title - shouln't it be Anbodu karadi ennodu ullathu? (or something like that my tamil not so good :P)
Hmm as for me haven't updated in a while since I was busy have some stuff in the pipeline so check back later.

sandhya said...

romba nalla iruku...oru padam paartha feeling! many guys deserve this dose :)

The Soliloquist said...

hey subbu...

three things.
1. post took me exactly 32 minutes to finish. Struggling with a vision prob, font size too small. post size too long.
2. Porumaiya 3/4 padichen, but skipped the asha advice part in the end. Aparum comments a pathutu thirumba poi pathen. Over build up oda side effects ithuthan. Solvanthathu maranjidum. Agree with what asha says. But konjam overa pesiruku ponnu... Evlo advice kudutha pasanga meranduduvanga.
2a)Nalla theme, ana characterisation nachu nu illa..

3.Kindly bear with me /= anbana karadi ennidam ullathu.

context um idikuthu, grammer um idikuthu, in both languages, even for a pj-style literal translation.


P.S: Next time, if you take so long for a post, do allot sometime for editing and re-editing... neraiya cut panni pace a kooti irukalam..


- Un Anbu thangachi :-)(although older by one day !)

Harish said...

yebbaaaaa!! juice kondu vaangaba.. evalo periya post!

but successful a padichu mudichuten.. scene a written :)

rsubras said...

@Chriss

Thanks da :D

@prithz

thankzz mah dear sis :D

@anuradha

accepted ur point...but iniku ulla practical world la nee solra maadhiri general ah solla mudiyathu la athan

@barbi
intentionaly made this one larger..coz i wanted to maintain the actual story as secret till the last dialog :D

rsubras said...

@karthik

ippaliku padichu mudichittiya?

@fun2fun

Thank uuuuu :D

@ramya

eiiii ozhunga padichu mudichittu comment pannu marubadiyum..solliputten aama (in sarathkumar ishtyle :p)

@sandhya

Thank u sis :) yea yea such kindaa guys deserve more dose than this :)

@my anbu thangachi

aaha ivlao porumaiya oru post ah padichirukke..athuvum tamil la eluthinatha......romba tanx ma :D

regarding ur points..yea shud have been shorter..but oru flow la vanthucha..apadiye eluthinen eluthinen eluthitte irunthaen..intentionally i took the story in different direction as i dont want to give it a preaching look from the first

Regarding the title..athu chumma side la oru dig at all the tamil paduthufying titles our directors are keeping...intha anbana karadi title is courtesy an old anandha vikatan joke

@nivi

Thankssss :) as i told earlier this title is courtesy an old anandha vikatan joke :D

@harish

Thanks da :D

Karthik B.S. said...

//it is not at all fair, nan konjam karuppa, middle class ah irukkaennu sollitu thane kandukkama poraa..ithe A/c car vachittu evanavathu vantha oc la niraya vangi kodupan nu vazhinjittu irunthirupa
//

Prem kaetadhu nyayamana kelvi dhaane!

Karthik B.S. said...

aana Aasha romba besha vecha poosa to Prem! :D

Karthik B.S. said...

Yebba eppadi indha madhiri ellam yosikka mudiyudhu ungalala? Chancey illa!

Aprom Chriss sonna madhiri unga real life'a base panni ezhudhineengala indha storya?

Karthik B.S. said...

eppadiyo enjoyed reading this post... took full 30 minutes to complete though!

md. said...

yealaaa mokka... asathi putta pooo.....

Goutam said...

this is really great subramaniyan...
nice story.....

Divya said...

Story asaththal! asaththal !

Aasha sonna ovoru point um kalakkals! kalakkals!

Chumma nuchu nuchunu super aah nethi adi koduthiruka aasha!

Gud one Subramaniyan!