Monday, May 08, 2006

Odi Polama..?

WARNING : This story carries a message :p and no this is not an inspiration from Prabhu's He-She series

He-He and She-She ("Ferrari" Prabhu holds the copy rights for He-She series) meets in park in a dull evening...

She-She : Deiii..

He-He : Ennama?

She-She : I have make up my mind

He-He : Un mugam irukara latchanathukku athukku make up potta ok..ethukku mind ku make up.. anga than onnum illiye

She-She : hehe...sorry oru chinna grammatical mistake. I told i have made up my mind

He-He : pesumbothe grammatical mistake ah.. kashtam... sari what have u made up

She-She : Naama nalaikku odi polama?

He-He : [shockingly] Ennappa solre... Neeya solre

She-She : Pinna enakku Savitha va dubbing koduthu ippo pesittu irukanga naan than solren

He-He : Anniku ithe kelvi ya naan kettappo, nee ennai thittunae?

She-She : aama athu anniku, ithu inniku

He-He : Adikkadi marurathukku inga enna Opinion poll ah eduthuttu irukom?

She-She : Dei, veetula othukuvanga ninaichen...psst...but avanga ketkale..... so intha decision ku vanthen

He-He : Sari... odi vara nee ready na, kootitu poga naanum ready...

She-She : Good, naan elathaiyum inniku night eh pack up pannidaren

He-He : No..No ethuvum vendaam...nee uduthina dress oda appadiye va...athu pothum

She-She : Really?? do u mean it? Good da..unnai ennamo ninaichen...avan avan athu eduthuttu vaa ithu eduthuttu va solra kaalathula....... nee

He-He : sari sari overaa urugaathe... correct ah 5'0 clock... appathan yaarum irukka maatanga... vanthudu

She-She : correct da..appa than enga veetula thoongitu iruppanga..nice ah varathukku vasathiya irukkum.. ok da a important day tomm... see ya tomm..correct ah vanthudu, kavuthudaathe....

[ Next day at the dawn 5 am... namma She-She medhu va cat walking pani velila vara... He-He is standing outside.... ]

She-She : machi paravalla seekiram vanthutte

He-He : Illiya pinnae, sari va polamaa....

She-She : Yes

And so, She-She who got disappointed by her father's decision on not buying a treadmill for her, starts her first day jogging along with the Athletic coach and her friend He-He

Moral of the Story : Atleast this summer, Get up early and exercise for keeping urself fit and a healthy mind and body. :)
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15 comments:

aks said...

Very Good subu .. unexpected end... cha mine corrupted mind :(

rsubras said...

wow thatz fastttttt... :)

Hehe..thanks aks :)

unknown said...

hey ni mattana unakku sankuthaan....after long time visiting urs..so many posts...so blogs...
keep going:-)

interfer--on said...

subbs,

Considering yer O.Henrical/Dahlolic bent of mind....i expected this end...... I thought of some marathon for the *vazhaga valamudan* theme :P :P

I_F

Badri said...

nala kilabarangaya bithiya!

Vijay Ramamurthi said...

nice !!


But have to say no way the conversation reflect any indication of joggin in their minds...
wud a person describes joggin as odi polaama? I really dont think so..
the twist in the end seems like a deliberate one!!

Muthukumar Puranam said...

lol rotfl..man that was hilarious! eppidi ezhutha mudiuthu?

prithz said...

Cool post!!! i never expected such an ending... engayo kondupoita po!!!

rsubras said...

@ ammu

:) naan un blog vanthathan nee inga varuviya? ithu bongu

@ interfer

tx da machi... nee enna brand pannite, en stories ending ippadithan irukum nu...wil try to write differently :p

@ badri

aaha kilambitangayya..kilambittanga :)

@ vijay

odalama nu ketpanga... oru story sense kaga inga odi polama nu ketkaranga :)

rsubras said...

@ muthu

welcome here....

(vivek style la)athelam appadiye appadiye.....

@ prithz

hehe nee sonna sari thaan :)

Neethi said...

unga kirukkals romba nalla irukka.ur satire on every aspect of people is good.

Anonymous said...

Super ending.....

Unmaiya sollu.,... u also wanted them to run away rite..... just for the sake of story u made them jog ;-)

Kirukal said...

Hilarious!!! He-He kku aanalum nakkal konjam jaasti!!!
And thanx for visiting my blog...keep coming!

KeyIyer said...

Good one
Keycar - Rediff

unknown said...

its not like that earier i used to visit ur site often but there was not anything new...thought ur busy and u will surely inform me when u post new...

anyhow after long time seeing josh in you...
enna niraiya blogs open panni irukinga but no post in that..waiting to read those too dear:-)