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Guys must be Crazy !!!

Foreword : I am still not able to get sufficient ideas for a new post... But since shout box layum comments layum pudhu post podu pudhu post podu nu miratti kettukittathala (:p) etho half-baked ah irukara idea va story ah develop panni post panren..... If you dont like it go and complain to them ( thapichukka ithuvum oru chance ;) ) . Well this is my first attempt at a "romantic" story........ hehe........ I thought of writing it fully in English..but some sentences nan ethirpaartha alavu varala (blame it on my english knowledge :p) So tanglish la elutharen...... Spl thanks to ramya and roshini for some minute help they did during this process.....

Guys must be crazy !!!

"These guys must be crazy yaar......." kannadi munnadi azhagu paarthu kondiruntha Asha sudden ah sonna.. PC la utkaarnthu busy ah Minesweeper aadittu iruntha Priya thirumbi paarthu ketta.. "thideernu enna Asha ularure........ Enna matter".........

Asha, "ada nijamma than solreen priya, these guys must be crazy..love kaga enna lam than pannuvangalo.." ena poiyyaga aluththu kondaal

Priya, "aaha, thideernu enna love pathi lam pesare.......... Yaar antha loosu paiyan?"..

Asha, "hey chumma iru di...naane kobathula irukkaen...........nee vera"

Priya : ai ai theriyuthe......... sollumbothe angae jollu kottuthe......... yaaru antha paiyan sollu

Asha: namma pakkathu cubicle Vikram irukkane avan en pinnadiye suthi suthi vanthuttu irukkan

Priya : adipaavi, nama dept ponnunga ellorum jollu vittutu irukkara vikram ah....... unnaiya.......... hey kannadi pakkathula ninukite nee ippadi lam kathai vidariye..nyayama

Asha : hey nijama pa..... anniku paaren Food Court la naan saptutu kai kazhuva ponen... anga ethini tap irukku.... but this vikram en pinnadiye ninnutu after i went, antha tap laye poi kazhuvinan

Priya : big deal...ithu bsnl signal ah vida oru weak ah na signal ....... ithai poi love signal nu enala othukka mudiyaathu

Asha : iru iru, even i didnt think nething about it........ nethikku athe Food court la naan saptutu enthiruchi ponen....... mobile vittutene nu thirumba vanthu paartha that guy Vikram na, naan use panna paper towel ah eduthu avan pocket la pottukittan...ithukku ena solre?

Priya : (surprised) hey nijammava solre ?

Asha : ada aamam pa....athan sonnen. These guys are crazy...... love nu vantha ethu naalum panranga.. nee venumna inniku en kooda Food court vaa inniku....

That afternoon........Priya and Asha dine together in the Food court. Vikram who enters the Food court at the same time, sits behind them.

Asha : paarthiya paarthiya, paiyan enga vanthu utkaruran nu...

Priya : sari sari porumai......

Both finish their lunch and go to wash their hand. As they return they see Vikram standing near the place where they had their lunch

Asha : hey atho paaru di...paiyan enna panrannu

Priya : iru iru.....

Vikram looks here and there, after getting convinced no one is around, picks up the tumbler that was used by Asha.

Asha (with a triumphant look) : ippa ena solre priya.......

Priya : yeah yeah guys are crazy only........ i will go and catch that guy red handedly

Asha : hey venaam pa....... enaku vetkama irukku

Priya : ada che..... ithu enna murali pada love ah.. kadsee varaikkum solamalaye love ah continue panrathukku.. varen iru

Priya straightly goes to Vikram who is amused to see her..

Priya : dei vikram, enna velai da panre..

Vikram : er..enna priya?

Priya : kai la ennadda tumbler

Vikram : oh ithuva, ellam un friend asha voda velai...... ava sema careless theriyuma....... kai kazhuva pona tap ah thiranthu vittudara......... sapta pinnadi use panna paper towel ah kondu poi kuppai la podarathilla........ ippo paru kudicha tumbler ah kooda eduthu vaikkarathilla...... eppavum oruthar pinnadi poi ithellam panna mudiyuma........ Food court volunteer aana pinnadi ennalam pana vendi irukku paaru........

Saying this, vikram proceeds to next table to collect the left over tumbler.

"Thud........." etho crash aachu Asha kullae, she couldnt mutter any other word except repeating "GUYS MUST BE CRAZY..........."!!!

Comments

Ramya Shankar said…
Half-baked idea kke idhu vaa? Aaha! Sooper!
Anonymous said…
nalla irruku...as usual kalakkfying subbu!!...romance with a punch dhaan :)
Anonymous said…
Subbu,
Very short and sweet ;) I would love more of this ! Good Job!
Neha said…
ROTFL!!! SUPER a irukku. Yeh dil mange more :)
@ramya,roshini,lilsweet & neha

that all girls like and appreciate this can be a taken as your token of approval rite? :)

Thanks thanks neway.........

@ramya : think pannumbothu half baked ah than irunthathu.......sari ippadiye think pannitu iruntha ennikum post pana maten ninachittu elutha aarambichen intha form la vanthuchu

@lilsweet : yea wud try :)

@ neha : hehee will try
May be vikram samalichufied after he was caught red handed!!! :o)

Chumma kidding..

Nice one!!!
Anonymous said…
wow subu!! kalakkite. This post is really good.. Even the title is good. The way you narrated is very natural and interesting. All the best and wishing to see more and more posts in this site.

Introduction romance solitu inda madiri story yeduthundu ponnadhu, really cool and unexpected. Unoda usual kadi type ilama sweeta irunthudu...

pavam Asha!! atleast nee than konjam help panen ;-)

and oru chinna doubt, Food Court base panni ivlo ideas vandathuku vera any special reason iruka ???
Anonymous said…
Subbu,
Nalla iruku nu sonna udane.. approval athuva ithuva nu kekarenga? Ponnungha na ippadi than think pandrom nu naanga accept pananuma? ithu enna anniyayama iruku?? Unga story writing nalla iruku nu sonen ;) Ponnungha intha maari suspicion @ confusion vara maari nadanthukave maatanga ..itha purinjikonga muthala!
Anonymous said…
Cute!!:)
@madhan - welcome to the blog madan, enna girls kaga arguing ah :p

@aks - romba thanks..no special reason. in general ppl's carelessness avlothan. ithaiye oru ponnu eluthiruntha asha wud have been ashwin :)

@lilsweet - nee sonnatha ponnungale othukka maatanga

@ ammmu - yeah yeah, thanks

@ dhanya - thanks.btw neenga athigam pesa maatengala?
Ramya Shankar said…
Comment pannadhu almost all girls polarkku!! LOL
Visithra said…
hehehehe good one butithu payan yoschi pohlambara maariyeh iruhke ;)
Anonymous said…
Hi subbu ,
Romba nalla yezhuthareenga....keep up the good work!! kavi :)
@meow : yea...this is the first time am writing a story kindal adichifying girls :) so udhai than kidaikkum ninaichen........ itz very nice that itz mostly girls than the guys who is appreciating this :) Girls are really sportive :)

@pavithra : tanglish na tamil+english..ithanai percentage irukkanum nu artham kidayathu :p

@visithra : hehe paiyan yosichathu ennada intha maathiri clean panrappo iva vanthuttale nu ninaikkaran

@kavi : thanks a lot kavi, do come often
Anonymous said…
sariyana mokkai :) Innum eppadiyellam arubadapporoma........aandava :)
~SuCh~ said…
Subbu... Kalakalo kalakal..very original and very coooooool...
ana enaku applicable nu yen sonna??
athan purila...
Anonymous said…
Paavam asha..ava manasu enna kashtapatirukkum. Dei vikram..nee indha jenmathula theramaata..
Anonymous said…
ithe kadhaya vera engayo paartha mathiri irukke..
Kartik Kannan said…
Hi Subramanian .I am making a wld guess that u were the guy ..who posted a 5 part chandramukhi on the CHN -INK ON INFY BB ...as Subramanian Ramachandran.

I notice that ur site is pretty popular ..and u write very well ..

A small Favour from u

, Can u please put a link on your blog about a blogging competition at saarang.sulekha.com and info that an official saarang blog run at saarangtalk.sulekha.com on your site ?
Nero said…
Wonder if you've realized by now that this story's become a popular forward mail.. :D

Good one!
Anonymous said…
onnu idikkuthey
even if you are a food court volunteer, nobody puts used paper towel into their pockets..sarithaane??

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