Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Kaadhal Neethana !!! - COMPLETED

P.S - Ithukku Rendu rendu part than... second part ezhuthale..within this weekend ezhuthanumnu irukkaen :D

Warning : once again, intha story la vara niraya terms, Software makkal than purinjukka mudiyum... thappa eduthukatheenga others :D

Warning 2: I like CHO's writing style very much...oru flow la ezhuthittu irukkumbothu sometimes he digress and expresses his opinion and then comes back to the story.... not that i followed his style here...but i tried a bit of that :)

UPDATE: Sorry for the enormous delayyy… Thanks to GG, Divya for constantly checking :D. For a story sense I have renamed the hero’s name to Sri from his earlier name.

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"Success!!! Success!!! Mission Achieved"

Project leader Ramki punched in the air in joy and the team (Test lead Kishore, tester Sampath, developers Priya, Sri endra Sridhar, Ranjith and Rohini ithaanga team ppl...thani thani ya intro kodutha kadhai pathu muzham vanthudum :D) who gathered around him joined in the celebrations by clapping their hands...Indha celebrations paarthuttu ithellam etho Rocket launching center layo, illa etho Scientific Research center layo nadakkaratha ninaichukatheenga... This scene happens in our very own Chennai in a software company. Matter onnum illa...The day was Wednesday, Project ku weekly delivery day. Athaan from the morning maangu maangu nu velai parthu, oru vazhiya after many builds and rebuilds, code ah pack panni onsite ku deliver pannitu, onsite co-ordinator ku mail anupi vachittu than intha celebration.... Semma tired ah feel panravangala appapa fired up panrathukku ippadi weird ah celebrate panrathu oru chinna pazhakam avlothan..

"sari sari podhum unga celebrations lam..." Project Manager Ramanathan thannoda cubicle la irunthu enthirichu vanthaar... "Deliver panniyaachu la...Ellorum veetuku kilambunga.... Time is 10 to 12... 12'0 clock CAB ah pidichathane veetukku seekiram poga mudiyum..mmm.mmm...seekiram kilambunga..Ramki make sure that ppl leave as early as possible” sollitu Ramanathan avar veetukku kilambinar...

Test lead Kishore, Ramki pakkam vanthu "paarthiya da Ramki, namma Ramu ku than team members mela evvalo karisanam.... kalai la irunthu aththai panniya iththai panni ya nu egathukkum torture koduthuttu irunthaaru..."

Ramki, "ada machaan athu illada... inniku anuppara delivery la irukkara bugs lam nalaikku onsite la irunthu anupuvanga la..athai fix panrathukku ellorum vanthudanum la..athan karisanam ponguthu avarukku"


Kishore, "sariya sonnae maams...Call center makkal kooda paravalla... Iravinil aatam, pagalinil thookam nu avangalukku life oduthu..nammala mathiri pasanga pozhappu than ippadi aayiduchu.... Christopher North ippo irunthiruntha Sun never sets in a software company nu sollirupaar"

Ramki chuckled..appo Rohini interrupted in their convo to ask, "sari annanungala.. unga mokkais lam kaalai la vachukkonga.. naangalam kilambattuma..thookam varuthu?"

Kishore "ei rohini...athan thimingilame sollitu poiduchu la kilambunga nu..appuram en intha sura meen kitta ketkare... Kilambu ma..."

Rohini "priya..vaa vaa.. Car poyida poguthu..vaa naama kilambalam..Dei Ranjith nee vare la" kettutu Rohini leaves with Priya...Ranjit, "aama rohini..one sec iru...system shut down pannitu varen" nu sollitu Ranjith kilambaran...

Ramki "sari vaada..naamalum kilambuvom...aama enga un tester Sampath...inga than irunthan, tak nu kaanama poitaan"

Kishore, "athu onnum illada...etho namma onsite aadhiseshan kaalai la oru doubt kettirunthaan..athuku reply panni mail anupittu kilambaren nu solitu avan cubicle poirukkan avlothan.....sari antha chinna paiyan Sri engae"

Ramki..."therila da Restroom poiruppan ninaikkaren...sari nee bike la thaane vanthirukke...enga veetu la mariyathaiya drop pannitu po...ECR road la polaam"

Kishore.."machan...athu ECR road ah irunthalum Easy ah na Road ilada...safe illada bike la porathu night la..vaa naamalum CAB laye poidalam.."

"Hmm..sari ok..then lets run..." monitor ah switch off pannitu Ramki started with Kishore

Sampath mail anupichittu thirumbi varumbothu antha idame silent ah irukku, as everyone had left... Sri mattum avan place la utkarnthu monitor ah ye paarthutu irukkan.. He approached him

Sampath: Dei maaple... ellorum kilambittanga.. nee mattum kilambama enada pannitu irukae?

Sri remained silent... Sampath avan pakathula vanthu paarkiran... Sri mugathula oru depressed look...

Sampath: dei Sri..enna aachu unakku..oru maathiri irukkae...ennada sogam... kaalaila namma thimingilam thittinathu ninaichu feel panriya... managers na apadi thane..ithukkelam feel pannalama?

Sri: cha athellam illada..

Sampath: oh oh..inniku build la nee panna module la ethum bugs varum nu kavalai padariya??

Sri: ada che... unakku intha project, software, office ithellam vittutu out of the box thinking eh varaatha

Sampath: hehee..enakku Black box, White box testing than soli koduthaanga..athennada Out of the box... :D..sari sari machi muraikkathe... enna matter... en intha sogam

Sri: hmmmm...(takes a deep breath)... machaan..konja naalave ore feelings da...sariya sappida mudiyale..thoonga mudiyale...

Sampath: yaaruda unnai disturb panra antha ponnu

Sri: deii......eppadi da oru ponnu than ennoda intha sogathukku karanam nu kandupidichae..nee genius da

Sampath: mannangatti... unnai maathiri 20-25 age group la ulla pasanga, naatai pathi, nammala suthi irukkara makkal pathi ya ninaichu kavalai pada poreenga..ungala feel panna vaikkira ore vishayam oru ponna than irukka mudiyum..sollu yaaru antha ponnu..

Sri: hmm....solraen...namma team Priya irukka la..ava thaan

Sampath: adappavi......ennada solrae..nijammava...

Sri : aama da...avaloda kuzhandhai mugam, eppavum smiling ah irukkara face, ellorukkum help pannanum nu ninaikara character, pesunaale paadura maathiri irukkara ava kural

Sampath: dei dei paarthu da...jollu kottuthu

Sri: machaan..mudiyala da... eppa paarthalum ava thinking ah ve irukku da... she is disturbing me so much da...ava thought vanthaa...appadiye enai naan maranthu poidaren... ava kannai paartha, enakku appadiye appdiye lightning struck aana maathiri aayiduthu....avalai pathi ninaichitte irukkanum nu thonuthu da..

Sampath: hmm hmm... konjam overaa than eri pochu nu ninaikaren unakku :)

Sri: poda...evvalo kashtama iruku theriyuma enakku...I am trying to avoid seeing her during office hours for fear of getting over emoted..aanalum mudiyala da... face kaati koduthudumo nu bayama iruku..enakku mugamudi pottuka therila...athunala mugatha moody ah irukkara mathiri vachikkaren...infact appapo namma thimingilam Ramu illena sura meen Ramki ivanga thittarathu vasathiya iruku...intha veshathukku

Sampath: hmmm da.. I can understand ur feelings and pain da... en da unakkulaye vachu kashta padare..sollida vendiyathu thane ava kitta

Sri: athu thaane bayame.. ennathan manasula intha kaathal ngra feeling baarama irunthalum, avala pathina dream appappo aarthala iruku... ava kitta naan solli oru velai ava reject pannita....... haiyyo athu ithai vida periya baarama irukkum da machaan..

Sampath: nee enda appadi ninaikare... probably avalukkum pidikkalam la..

Sri: pssst...nambikkai illada.. naan podhuva girls na avvalava pesurathu kidayathu.. aarambathula training la irunthappo, romba shy ah irunthathala, priya ulpada, yaaru vanthu pesunalum sariyave pesama avoid pannirukaen...athaan paaren namma team la ellar kittayum jolly ah gala gala nu pesara ponnu, enkitta avvalava pesa maata..inga pakkathula Ramki kitta adikkadi doubt ketka vara ponnu...intha pakkame paarkama, kandukkama poiduva... inimael ava kitta pesi, friendship aagi, opinion create panni....vidinjidum

Sampath: already vidinjiduchi :) machaan..time is 1 am already...

Sri : podaa.. ipadiye pala nights intha love success aaguma, failure aagiduma nu yosichu thoongama irunthirukaen..

Sampath: sari da..sari da serious ah ve ketkaren... enkitta solli te la naan unakku help panren da love success panrathukku

Sri : ennada panna pore...

Sampath: cinema la hero friend lam hero ku enna idea kodupan....heroine kitta vambu pana oru rowdy ah set up panni, antha idathula hero va fight panna vachu, opinion create pannra maathiri idea koduppan la

Sri: athukku?

Sampath: athe maathiri...naan thane ava module testing panraen..athula design side ah paaru thappu thappa niraya bug pottudaren...ava HTML la konjam weak...nan solrathu nijammave bug ah nu kooda paarka theriyaathu... Ramki kum sariya theriyaathu..so kandippa unkitta than varuva doubt ketka... avalukku nee help pannina un mela oru image varum..athai vachu love valarthukko

Sri: dei donkey... nalla kodukkirae da uruppadatha idea.. unkitta kettaen paaru.... reebok shoe ah laye ennai adichikkanum...

Sampath: sari da sari da feel pannathe..ennoda range ku idea sonnaen avlothan..

Sri: poda dubukku..naane paarthukaren...

Sampath: kizhichae... nee murali maathiriye silent ah irunthu appuram arali vidhaya araichu kudichiduvae... naan solraen kelu... sariya thappo...ava kitta propose pannidu, aanathu aagatum

Sri: dei machaan..ennada solrae


Sampath: aama da..athu than ore vazhi...vidinja Valentine's day...Feb 14.. sentimental ah correct ah 12 manikku un love ah nee first time velila open pannirukae..indha naalai vittudathe...inike greeting koduthu avalukku propose pannidu..illena evanavathu munthikka poraan..

Sri: dei avasara paduthathe machaan.... enakku amaiyara vaazhkai thana amaiyum da

Sampath : poda dubukku... machaan...Vazhukkai thaan da thanaa amaiyum...Vaazhkai lam naamala than amaichikkanum.... u give a try on val's day man... work out aagum

Sri: eppadi da nadakkum nu solrae??

Sampath: kandippa nadakkum.... Independence day anniku konjam kooda desiya unarve ilama kavunthu paduthuttu thoongara makkal kooda, Kaadhalar thinam anniku semma kaadhal unarvoda iruppanga.. anniku ne poi priya kitta propose pannina work out aagara vaaipu irukku..adhuvum illama weekly delivery project nammathu... ithula Thursday than konjam relaxed time..Friday la irunthu next Wednesday varaikkum, adutha build semma tension ah pogum..pesarathukku time eh irukkathu...So make or break tomorrow...

Sri: sari da.. nee solrathum correct u than... let me get things clear.. enakku en feelings ah kattu padutha mudilae..athuvum ava ramki kitta vanthu vanthu pesumbothu, psst..enakku pidikkalai da..romba posessive ah feel panraen...i know it is wrong...but i cant help this...anyway....u have given me a glimmer of a hope.. kandippa naan nalaikku propose panraen... sari vaa naama veetukku kilambalam

(With this resolve, Sri and Sampath leaves for the day....)



Next day…. Actually same day than...Sri yum Sampath um Thursday athigaaaaaalai 1 manikku thane kilambinaanga… sari, Logically speaking, thoongi enthirucha than oru naal mudinju adutha naal aarambikuthu nu vachukalam… apdiye paarthalum Sri ku athu same day thaaan..avan than night full ah thoongave illiyae…. Priya kitta thannoda love ah propose panna porom ngra ninaippu avanukkulla semma excitement undaaki vittuduchu….. Priya Yeah solvaala, illa poya nu solvala nu ore tension.. Fears apart, romba naala suppress panni vachiruntha love ah Priya kitta express panna porom ngra feeling avanoda udambula ovvoru cells aiyum excite aaki vittirunthathu…. Excited state la irukkara atoms ah LASER state nu solvom la, appadi paartha, namma Sri anniku oru Super LASER state la than irunthaan… purandu purandu paduthalum, thookam vara maatennu murandu pidichitte irunthathu… athanala 6 manikku lam enthirichu, kilambi, 8 am ku lam office ku ready aagitan…

Office ku pogara vazhi la, oru gift shop ku poitu ethuna greeting card vangalam nu paarthan Sri… He was of the view, that 8 am was too early for a gift shop to open…. Oru doubt oh da than kilambinaan… But he was surprised, when he saw so many gift shops opened and that too crowded by lover guys and wanna be lover guys… Athu sari… intha maathiri nalla business nadakkanum nu thane, intha maathiri hype kilappi vitturukkanga… appuram en early ah thiranthu vaikka maatanga…. 24x7 timing la yae thiranthu vachiruppanga, inniku Valentines day ku irukkara public support ku… innum indha day anniku Govt leave vidarathu onnu mattum than baaki…. Oralavu decent ah na kadai kulla nulainju irunthathu la oru Greeting Card ah pick up panni eduthuttu vanthaan…. Aduthu love Gift ku romba thevaiyana Roses than avan enga thedinaalum kidaikkave illae... sari love proposal ku roses ah vida, ezhuthara Proses thane mukkiyam nu thannaiye console pannitu office ku kilambi poidaran

Time was 8:30, Few staffs mostly, the house keeping people and the other project ppl were in office at that time..athuvum Sri project la the previous day overnight work pannathunala, ppl will start coming only after 10 or 10:30... athu varaikkum thaniya tension oda eppadi utkarnthirukkarathu nu yosicha Sri, Sampath ku call pottan....

Ring went on the other side, kittathata after 10 rings, Sampath picks up the call

Sampath : Hello.. (in a feeble voice)

Sri : ennada pannitu irukae

Sampath : (yawn) thoongitu irukkaen da..

Sri : adinga...hurry up da..innum enna thookam..kilambi office vaada...

Sampath: dei manasaatchi irukka da unakku... 2 ku thaan da en veetukku vanthaen... athukkula ezhuppi ethukku da thookathai kedukkare.. onsite aadi seshan phone pannana.. nethikku nama anupicha thula ethum prachinaiya ?

Sri : vayitherichala kottatheda.. athai pathi yaaru kavalai patta... nee thaane inniku en love ah propose panna sonnae... etho oru thairiyathula prepare pannitu vanthirukkaen..tensed ah iruku da.. konjam company kodukka vaada

Sampath: adapavi..adappavi...athaane..love nu vanthutta, office velai ekkedu kettu ponalum kavalai pada maatengalae...podaanga... unakku love propose panrathukkelam ethukku da company... neeye yosichu ethuna pannuda.

Sri : dei dei bayama irukku da..ithellam enakku romba pudhusu da...

Sampath : naan mattum enna 5, 6 ponnungalai love panitu, naan avanillai nu sollitu irukaena.. poda loosu... love la mattum yaarum apprentice ah iruka kodathu da.. entha prachinai vanthalum affront with ease ah irukkanum..purinjatha...so neeyae samaali

Sri : Guruuuuuuu..paarthiya...intha maathiri encouraging ah pesarathukke nee venum da.. dei maaplae... nee kulikka kooda venaam... inniku valentines day nu avanavan kanda kanda scent ah pottutu vanthirukan..office eh naaruthu... so appadiye kilambi vaa..

Sampath: aaargh..kaalangrathla kadichu en thookathai keduthuttae... unnoda thollaiya pochu...sari vidu.. varen innoru 15 mins la....

Sri : thanks da..nee than da en uyir nanban...

Sampath: aama naan uyir nanban..nee uyirai edukkira nanban.... phone ah vai..

Sri phone ah cut pannitu, Priya ku nu vaangina greetings la ethuna ezhuthi kodukalame nu ezhutha aarmbikiran....yosichu yosichu ezhuthinathula time ponathe therila.... Sampath Office ku vanthu avanai ulukkina pinadi than Sri thannoda dream world vittutu intha world kullaye vanthaan...

Sampath: dei loosu ennada panrae?

Sri : hehe.. en aalu ku propose pannanum la..athukkaga oru chinnatha kavithai ezhuthinaen da..

Sampath: enda project ku code eh nee net la irunthu eduthu copy paste panni than poduvae.. ithu eppadi

Sri : sonthama ezhuthinaen da... meyyalumae...

Sampath: kodu, padichu paarkalam...

[Sampath reads out the poem Sri had written for Love Proposal]



pen mayilae...
un penmaiyilae,
mana menmaiyilae,
anbulla thanmaiyilae,
karuvizhi kanmaiyilae,
sarukkinaen naan, en thinmaiyilae,
ulamara unai nesikkiraen unmaiyilae,
sammatham thanthu en vaazhvelam varuvaya en anmaiyilae...



Sampath : ada ada ada..eppadi da eppadi da….. kalakkirukkae po…. Intha poem padicha Priya urugiduva po..un mela

Sri: iru maapu…namakku en intha irumaapu… etho manasula irukkaratha vaarthaiya pottiruken da..avlothan… I didn’t try to add any decorations to this……….

Sampath: rite da rite da..puriyuthu… .sari, all set da machi… poi letter ah koduka vendiyathu thane… Priya ponnu office vanthudicha

Sri: yea yea..da vanthtutta….

Sampath: apuram enda delay panrae.. kondu poi kodu po

Sri:machaan..poru da… konja neram aagatum…..tensed ah irukku da..

Sampath: ennada tense… Present tense la tense aane nu vachukkoyen..unoda future tensed ah ve irukkum….. delay panama un love ah relay pannu po….

Sri: dei mama.. (gets a bit nervous)

Sampath: machii…. Inniku un villain Ramki 11 manikku than varuvaan…avan vanthuttan na un kaariyame kettuthu…either unakku work mela work koduthu utkara vachiduvaan.. illangati antha priya ponnu kitta vazhiya aarambichiduvaan…avan vazhiya munnadi nee propose pannara vazhiya paaru…

Sampath ipadiyaga force panni Sri ya greeting cards oda anuppi vaikkaran avan cubicle ah irunthu…. Sri ku than Ivvalo neram romantic mood la irunthavan tak nu real life ku crash land aana mathiri aayiduchu.. thayangi thayangi Priya cubicle nokki nadanthaan..Eduthu vacha ovvoru step layum avan heart beat, Simbu padathula varra dan danakka beats ah vida semma fast ah adikkka aarambichathu… Priya enna vidai tharuvaa…. piriya vidai tharuvala…illaena avalai vittu naan piriya vidai tharuvala…. Would she or Would she not….. ippadiye nervous ah pala questions sumanthukittu Priya cubicle pakkama ponan… anga cubicle pakkathula iruntha pillar orama poi ninnu, priya ku theriyama ava cubicle la vera yaaravathu antha neram irukkangala nu paarthan…. Oru velai Priya, thannoda letter ah paarthu ethuna extreme ah react panna, mathavanga munnadi maanam pogama paarthukalamae…!!! Ellam oru disaster control measure thaan….

Priya seemed to be busy with something… ava friend Rohini was near her.. Priya va suthi gift wrapper, balloons, greeting card cover, sketch pens lam irunthathu…. She seemed to be writing something in that card….Sri wondered… naan than ivalukku propose panrathukku greeting card oda varen… intha ponnu card ah vachittu enna pannuthu…….. oru velai ivalum Valentines day kaga propose panna poraalo… ninaikkumbothe Sri manasu jollunu…sorry… jillunu :D aayiduchu, because, when he suspected she is writing a Val’s day card, he assumed, she is writing to her… Eppavume namakku heart thane takes precedence over mind… but soon sanity prevailed and his mind started thinking practically…. “oops…appadi na appadi na…. she is going to propose to some one…avalum love panraala…. Yaarai yaarai…” questions swarmed his mind… avanukku help panrathukkagavo ennavo, Rohini ithe kelviya Priya kitta ketta

Rohini : Hey Priya, enna pa panrae.

Priya : (busily writing in the card) mmm..sattiyum, paanaiyum panraen… paartha therilae… Greeting card fill pannitu irukkaen..

Rohini : athu theriyuthu… Gifts, chocolates, Greeting cards…. Ithellam unkitta paarkumbothu rumba Pudhusa irukkae

Priya : (still writing) hmm..hmm..ellam pudhusa than aarambikkum…. Enna panrathu…….

Rohini : sari sari…athelam vidu.. yaarukkaga intha greetings, gifts lam….sollu sollu

Priya: (Rohini ya nimirnthu paarthu, with a smile) en pa..unakku theriyaatha… innaikku enna naal nu (smiles again)… naan marubadi solanuma..

Rohini : heyy..nijammave theriyaathu…….. sollen….

[Sri yum 512 kbps (kilo (heart)beats per second) heart oda answer for the same million dollar question ku wait pannitu irunthaan………… He closed his eyes tightly….and prayed to himself… Priya en perai sollanum..en perai sollanum…en perai sollanum]

As if to add to the suspense, Priya paused for a few seconds and then said with a shy smile

Priya: namma Project Leader Ramakrishnan alias Ramki

[Bang……there it is…. The worst Sri feared has just come out of Priya’s mouth…. As a shocked Sri listened, the convo went on between Priya and Swapna]

Rohini : heyyyy…nijammava……… sollave illiyae

Priya: ithellam poi solitu iruppangala…. Sari sari… help me with wrapping these gift into this oki… I want to surprise Ramki when he arrives in office tomorrow (blushes)

Rohini : periya aalu than nee sariya plan podare po… eppa pa ithellam

Priya : (smiles and blushes) hmmm..hmm athai yen ketkare… pona vaaram project la oru tough module la avar kitta help kettutu ponen la… kittathatta oru 5 hours work panniruppom..appo than.. (pauses..smiles)

Rohini : killadi nee..kalakkare po….

(ippadi ponnunga rendu peru pesittu irukkaratha sogame uruvaa kettutu iruntha Sri ku oru kattathuku mela porukka mudilae… Priya kita propose panna vanthappo, ava enna solvaalo, ethu solvaalo nu bayanthuttu than vanthaan… but human psychology is, when u do something, expecting something to happen, you get tensed and nervous about doing it, but when u realize it is not going to happen, the expectation on that “something” is removed… In that situation, all the tension and pressure gets relieved, and you tend to do the same thing with more vigour… Ithai than Sri Krishnar BhagvatGita la Seiyyum seyal meethu pattru vai, Seyalin vinai meethu patru vaikathe nu artham vara maathiri Kadamaiyai Sei, palanai ethirpaarathe nu advise panninaar…… , namma story layum egappatta tension la iruntha namma hero Sri ku, Priya-Swapna conversation kettu, mudhalla sogathula idinju poi ninnalum, konja nerathula, ithe maathiri thelivu piranthathu…. Theerkama Priya munnadi poi ninnan)

Sri : (brimming with emotion) Priya, nee intha maathiri Greetings, gifts………. Cha.. unkitta naan ithai ethir paarkave illae

(Priya was like stunned… ithu varaikum avvalava pesaatha Sri ippo thideernu vanthu pesaran, athuvum kobama, but samalichikittu she replies)

Priya : Why, whatz with it… Intha maathiri oru special day la ippadi lam celebrate panna ena thappu???

Sri : irukkalam…aana nee ippadi pannuvaenu naan ethir paarkalae.. unnai paartha romba soft spoken ponnu maathiri theriyuthu… aana nee love la vizhuvae, Valentine’s day anniku greeting, gifts lam eduthuttu, neeye poitu oru paiyanukku thanthu propose pannuvaennu naan ethir paarkave illae..nichayama ethir paarkalae….

(emotion la, romba unarchivasapattu kotti theerkaran Sri)

Priya: hello hello mister wait……. Pesi mudichiteengala…. En sir….. February 14th Greeting card eduthuttu poi oru paiyanukku kodutha….. athu Love proposal ku mattum thaana… en February 14th anniku yaarukkum pirantha naal vara koodatha… appadi vantha avangala yaarum wish panna koodatha???

[Shocked was the reaction… this time it was a pleasant shock!!!]

Sri : enna enna…. Appadina…inniku Ramki ku….

Priya: aama namma PL Ramki ku Feb 14th ah na inniku birthday…. Surprise ah avarukku gift and greetings koduthu surprise pannalam nu naan, Ranjith, Kishore ellarum plan pannom….

[Sri could not believe his ears…. He could not control his tears also….tears of joy]

Sri : oh!!!

[Rohini interrupts]

Rohini : Sari da Sri, apadiye iva Ramki ku Valentines’ day card kodukkarane vachukkuvom…athunala unakku enna….?

[Shaken by this unexpected question, Sri composes himself to answer)

Sri : enna….enna…enna…. I LOVE YOU Priya

[solllitaaan… manasula irunthatha solliye puttan Sri…. No violin music, no drum beats etc.,Rohini becomes speechless, Priya was shocked…and without blinking her eyes replied back]

Priya: whaaaaaaat…. You too???

Sri : you too va… appadina…vera yaar yaaaru unnai Love panraanga Priya?

Priya : ada mandu…. Naan than ivvalo naala ungalai love pannitu irukkaennu ninaichitu irukkaen… neengaluma ennai love panreeenga….

[intha idathula thamthana thamthana music pottukonga… namma hero Sri manasula than intha music…]

Sri : neeya…neeya…neeya pesare Priya… nee ennai love panriya…. Nee adikkadi Ramki place ku than varuviya… oru velai Ramki ya than..athavathu..vanthu..vanthu…

Priya : haha en mennu muzhungareenga…. Naan Ramki place ku, ethavathu karanam vachittu adikkadi varathu unmai thaan…. Aana nee avar place pakkathula irukkarathunala than naan anga varen grathu ungalukku theriyuma… unga kitta pesanum pesanum ninaichu, aana ungalai paarthavudane antha idathai vittu vanthuttathu theriyuma

[Sri was stunned on hearing this… he could only stutter]

Sri: appo..appo… ellar kittayum free ya pesara neee, enkitta mattum ithu varai pesama avoid pannathu…athu..athu…

Priya : haha.. ithu koodava puriyala ungalukku… naan podhuvaga gala gala , sidu moonji kitta kooda jolly ah pesara type..appdi irukkara naan, unga kitta pesa mudiyalai na..appave purinjikka vendaam… ungala paarthavudane ennala mathavanga kitta irukkara maathiri irukka mudilae..athu en nu solla theriyaatha oru vetkam… training batch la paarthathula irunthu, ur quiet ness, ur sharp mind, ur tendency to help others ithellam ennai rombave impress panniduchi… sari ennikana oru naal love ah express pannalam nu vachittu irunthaaen..aana neengale express pannuveenga nu naan kandipa ethir paarkale

[ avlothaan… Sri clean bowled… he is lost for words…all his lips cud mutter is “Priya…” ivanga rendu peroda love dialogue la maathiri nadula ninnutu onnume pesama iruntha Rohini, decency karuthi antha idathai vittu poidara.. ]

Priya : Sri…

Sri: Priii….

[ippadiyaga mathiyana velai la oru software company la ellar naduvulayum intha Romance thodara, Greeting card, Roses, Valentines day nu ethuvume thevai illama rendu hearts exchange nadanthathu… Ellorum Sri-Priya love ku Vaazhga Valarga sollunga paarkalam… naan ippo Subam poda poraen… Nandri Vanakkam…. ]

[SUBAM]

26 comments:

Gargling Garbage said...

aaHaa... Idhu dhaan Subs oda style - story ya thongalla vittutu pordhu..!! Hmm... Hari ya Haridas-aa ve maintain pannunga, Devdas vendaam..!! Phlees..!! ;) ... Swarasyama pogudhu kadhai.. Proj deadline Friday maathika mudiyaadha..?! ;)

Li'l prob reg my blog, so will not post comments or publish new blogs until weekend... Swalpa adjust madi saar..!!

PREETI said...

uhoh...enaku story half la vitaale pudikadu! plz continue! illana mandai vedikum! idla 3 dayz weekend vera... :-/

Gargling Garbage said...

He he... Naan sonnadhu ongoloda project, adhaavdhu, kaadhal neethana deadline..! Weekend varaikum wait panna vekkaama, Friday ye post pannalaamey ;)

Btw, idhu sooofer :D :D
"poda dubukku... machaan... Vazhukkai thaan da thanaa amaiyum...Vaazhkai lam naamala than amaichikkanum...." :D :D

Raz said...

nalla iruku! parkalam end padichitu sollren

Divya said...

\\.."machan...athu ECR road ah irunthalum Easy ah na Road ilada...safe illada bike la porathu night la..vaa naamalum CAB laye poidalam.."\\

remba koreectuuuu:)

Divya said...

\\Sampath: mannangatti... unnai maathiri 20-25 age group la ulla pasanga, naatai pathi, nammala suthi irukkara makkal pathi ya ninaichu kavalai pada poreenga..ungala feel panna vaikkira ore vishayam oru ponna than irukka mudiyum..sollu yaaru antha ponnu..\\

ROTFL:)

Divya said...

\\ hehee..enakku Black box, White box testing than soli koduthaanga\\

grey box testing.......???

Divya said...

your own style of mokkais.....makes the story flow very intresting,

Enjyd reading the post!!

eager to know , what hapnd to Hari's proposal........jalthi saab.....next part jaalthi post karo na!!

Dreamzz said...

:)

Gargling Garbage said...

Oiii.. Extended weekend-aa..?! Post Part 2... Part two... Part II... Part ii... :P

PREETI said...

secnding gargling garbage...post part II!

Divya said...

part 2 .......eppo publish??
waiting:)

Divya said...

wowwwwwwwww..............kalakals!!

cute story:)

subamaha mudichuteenga, hats off:-)

dialogues and Sri's tension feelings r expressed in a remarkable way, simply superuuuuuuuuu!!

Divya said...

thanks for informing abt the second part subu:)

Divya said...

when I checked ur blog for the second part......it cudnt be accessed, need authorization nu mesg vanthathu,

authorised viewers ku than permission granted aa???

Divya said...

\\Priya: (Swapna va nimirnthu paarthu, with a smile)\\

Rohini's other name is 'Swapna' vaa????

Divya said...

\\ivanga rendu peroda love dialogue la maathiri nadula ninnutu onnume pesama iruntha Rosh, decency karuthi antha idathai vittu poidara.. \\

intha 'Rosh' yaaru??

'nandhi' maathiri naduvula........apdinnu varum, antha word is missingsuuuuuuu!!

Divya said...

\\Sri : dei dei bayama irukku da..ithellam enakku romba pudhusu da...

Sampath : naan mattum enna 5, 6 ponnungalai love panitu, naan avanillai nu sollitu irukaena.. poda loosu... \\

ROTFL:)

Divya said...

\\love la mattum yaarum apprentice ah iruka kodathu da.. entha prachinai vanthalum affront with ease ah irukkanum..purinjatha...\\

nalla puriyuthungov:))

Divya said...

\\pen mayilae...
un penmaiyilae,
mana menmaiyilae,
anbulla thanmaiyilae,
karuvizhi kanmaiyilae,
sarukkinaen naan, en thinmaiyilae,
ulamara unai nesikkiraen unmaiyilae,
sammatham thanthu en vaazhvelam varuvaya en anmaiyilae...\\

meyalumey kavithai.....jooperuuuuuu!!

Divya said...

\\Sorry for the enormous delayyy… Thanks to GG, Divya for constantly checking :D.\\

nachcharipu thangama next part potu mudichuteenga......thanks!!

Gargling Garbage said...

Hey annaththeyyy..!!

Yet another kalakkal story..!! Race la dhaan semma twist neneichein, but Kaadhal neethaana la pinniteinga ponga..!! He he.. adhu enna, sri for story sense..!! Hari nu vechchirundha Hari Priya aayirkum la :P But who knows, Sripriya might consider this for her next directorial venture ;)

Pudichcha portions yeraalam, but romba pudichadhu -

1 - Sampath: aama naan uyir nanban..nee uyirai edukkira nanban.... phone ah vai..
2 - 512 kbps (kilo (heart)beats per second)
3 - Priya: whaaaaaaat…. You too???

Yeah, like Divya pointed out, a few mistakes here n there... But it's okie pa, plastic surgery panniduvom ;)

The story brightened up my Tuesday morning..!! :D Romba danx romba danx..! Continue kirukkings and keep kalakkings..!! :D

Yappie Fool's Day :D

PREETI said...

"thayangi thayangi Priya cubicle nokki nadanthaan..Eduthu vacha ovvoru step layum avan heart beat, Simbu padathula varra dan danakka beats ah vida semma fast ah adikkka aarambichathu"

buhahhaaha!

oh wow! imn actully romba sick rite now...n im at home n i decided to read this...fever lam poye poindi! hehe...

reallly cute story...supera mudichiteenga...when she said 'ramki', sri ku manasu odanjido illayo, inga naa ohhhhh :( :( nu ayiten! but im SOOOOOO glad it ws a happy endin!

super!

waitin for next :)

Karthik B.S. said...

super. romba chinna story'a irukku.. aprama padikren.

Chriss said...

Feb 14th Bday varavanga ellamae paavam story lae , cinema lae indha foreign maapilai maathri caracter dhaan poela

Chriss said...

Feb 14th Bday irukavanga ellamae indha america maapilai, love la misconception panna padra aalungalaavae irupaangaloe :-)