Saturday, November 17, 2007

Enakkoru Girl Friend venumae - Final Part

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Read the third part here..
Read the fourth part here..

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Warning 1 : Story at last finished.... Once again it is toooooo lengthy.. Kindly bear with it :D

Warning 2 : Intha part konjam serious ah ve irukku :D

[Continued..]
Indhu ippadi sonnathum, 1000V shock waves kaathula vizhuntha maathiri oru feeling Raju ku….. one more shocking news over the phone…………. Aduthu enna pesarathunae therila Raju…. Indhu ku phone pannumbothu , Raju was like, worried about if all is fine with Sujatha… but intha maathiri oru news avan nichayama ethirpaarkale…

Raju: Whaaaat engaged….ah?

Indhu: ada aama pa… ithai kettappa enakkum shocking ah than irunthuchu… avaloda child hood friend naan… enakke inniku kaathala than theriyum … 3 naalu oorku porennu sollitu pona ponnu, 1 week ah abscond aagittu inniku kaalaila phone panni solraa…. “enakku engaged aayiduchi di… ennoda athai paiyan thaan mappilai…. “ nu… Family function ku nu pona idathula, avanga athai, tak nu ivaloda appa kitta ivalai ponnu kettutangalam.. It was like totally unexpected for her pola… ethir paaratha vishayama irunthalum, avanai ethir la paartha vudane ivalukkum pathikichaam…. Ok sollirukka…. Antha paiyan US la velai paarkiranam.. 1 month leave la India vanthirukkan pola…. Seekiram kalyanathai mudikkanumnu udane nichayam pannitangalam… next month kalyanam nu sonna… avaloda mobile ah ingaye vachittu poitathala yaarukkume inform pannala…. Sorry di sorry nu aayiram thadavai sorry kettuta… sari pona poguthu, etho ponnu santhosama iruntha sari than nu free vittutaen :)

Ippadi Indhu sollite poga poga, Sujatha mela Kaadhal la vizhuntha Raju ku ithu ethuvume kaathula vizhalae….. he was totally perplexed.. avanukku ethuvume pesa varala…. Reply ethuvume varathathala, Indhu line la than etho problem nu ninaichu konja neram hello hello solli paarthutu appuram cut pannidara phone ah…


Raju….he was shattered.... Back to square one… enakku mattum en ippadi nadakkuthu… naan yaar mela laam anbu vaikkareno, avangallam innorutharai love panna aarambichidaranga… ithu varaikkum paravalla, sister, friend nu relation………aana…aana.. ippo naan love panra ponnu… avaluma………. Enna kodumai ithu.. :(

oru velai Indhu than ennai fool panrathukaga ippadi poi solirupalo…. ithu nijammave upset ah illa Indhu panna set up ah appadinu oru ishmall doubt varuthu Raju ku… Correct ah antha time la Sujatha logs in into G-Talk… It was a surprise for Raju.. and more surprisingly she pings him first..

Sujatha: hey Raju….. hi hi..

(Raju remains silent for a while)

Sujatha: Raju..raju… my dear friend… nee en mela semma kobathual irukkaennu puriyuthu… antha donkey Indhu kitta pesinaen ippa than… ennoda marriage pathi unkitta sonnatha sollita…

Raju: adippavi appo nijamthana…. (Raju gets semma upset, but G-Talk la emotions ah kaatara emoticons illathathala…, Sujatha ku Raju voda feelings puriyala)

Sujatha: aaama da…. Unga kitta lam en appave sollalai ngra reasons lam Indhu erkanve sollirupa la…. unkitta mudhalaye sola mudiyalai nu nan romba feel pannen theriyuma… bcoz..bcoz….

[“ Bcoz…dammit… I started loving u…” apadinu Azhagan la vara Bhanupriya style la solvaalo nu oru chinna nappasai vanthuchu Raju ku…ava bcoz ku appuram vitta ithunoondu gap la.. But ithu than padam illiyae :p, Sujatha continues ]

Sujatha: …bcoz u know you had been a very good chat friend, enakku advice lam panni, aaruthal solli…….. I was feeling semma lonely last two months theriyuma… with no one at home… …. Bfore I got to know u, whenever I feel lonely, esp after finishing with college and no one to talk with, I would be daily writing diary addressing a virtual character….. unkooda pesa aarambichathula irunthu antha pazhakkathaiye vittutaen…. Sila vishayam lam I cant tell to any one else, not even my girl friends, one reason is that all these loosu friends of mine does not have the patience to hear what I say…… naan ularunathellam porumaiya kettutu, u know u gave me a chance to vent it out………. And the best thing is, thappa eduthukkathe Raju.., since I don’t know u or have not seen u, it gave me that comfort to tell it out which I don’t find with my real world friends

Raju: Hmmmm….. (Raju ku vera ena pesarathu nu therila….aduthaduthu nenjile kathi kuthu irangina maathiri irunthuchu as she was talking, so just mmm kottitu irukkan…)

Intha nerathula Raju voda PM, Raju kitta project status ketkarathukkaga koopidararu…. Raju had to go… so he tells to Sujatha,

Raju: Hey Sujatha….hold on oki…. I will BRB (Be Right back)

Sujatha: Oki da…

Raju voda PM sariyana mokkai pottu kitathatta 15 mins aakidararu…. Raju thannoda place ku vanthu chat window ah paartha, Sujatha has logged off leaving a message

Sujatha: Ennada Raju, be right back nu sollitu u had left me back… pesama be left back nu sollirukalam nee :p Sari, jokes apart, inimael naan avvalava online vara maaten, appadiye vanthaalum avar kooda kadalai podarathukke time pathathu :D, It was great knowing u, I will try to keep in touch thru mails…neeyum mail pannu oki… I don’t know if I will be able to send u marriage invitation, coz chat friend na en hubby enna solvaaro therila :D, sorry da….. kochikkathe enna…. I know u wont be angry…. Let us part as friends for now….

Ippadi oru msg vittutu, Sujatha has logged off… avlothan…. 1 month ah katti kappathina relation mudinjathu….. Part of life aava nu paartha, let us Part as friends nu sollitu poitaale nu thonuthu Raju ku…. He just can’t control the emotions and the feeling of being ditched. Unable to take any more, Not feeling well nu PM ku chinnatha oru mail anupichittu he leaves the office.

[Same day, Evening time]

Athey Besant nagar beach… Same sea… Same loneliness…. This time, the waves were turbulent than the previous time, just like his mind, he thought. Cha… Kadal aruge kadalai poda sila per, kadhal panna pala per nu Jodi Jodi ya vanthirukkanga… naan mattum than ippadi thaniya pulamba vanthirukkaen… He was feeling lot sicker than last time, apadiye kadalai muraichu paarthuttu irukkan…. Pona thabaa mathiriye intha thabavum avan friend Magi varaan, Raju kitta vanthu avan shoulder la kai vachu ketkiran

Magi: Hey da Raju…. Nice to see u here again after a month

Raju:: (thirumbi paarthu, he gets peeved at seeing Magi) dei Magi..unakku vera velaiye illaiya..eppavum beach laye suthittu irukkae.. nee enna inga sundal vithuttu irukkiya…. Naan eppa beach vanthaalum enakku munnadi nee nikkare

Magi: (taken aback) hey dude..cool..cool… enna aachu…. Why are u angry with me?

Raju: (furious) pinna ennada pinna, anniku un veena pona advice ah kettu than ippa naan intha nilaimai la irukkaen…

Magi: adappavi naan enna sonnaen..sari vidu..ippa enna aachu sollu…

Raju: solraen solraen…. Naanum yarkittayavathu kottanum la…. Solraen… but nane veruthu poirukkaen..ippo karuthu solraneu solli aruthu thallidaathe… purinjatha?

Magi: oki oki sure :) :) nee sollu

(Raju narrates the entire events in the past one month in detail)

Raju: naan paatukku ozhunga, girls pakame pogama irunthaen…. Un pechai kettu intha paithiyakara kaadhal la vizhunthu…..ava mela evvalo anbu, respect lam vachiruppen theriyuma… kadsee la en friendship aiye insult panra maathiri nee verum virtual friend nu sollitaa… appo naan verumane chatting kum, time pass kum mattum thaana?

[Magi keeps quiet as Raju continues…]

Raju: enakku mattum en da ipadi nadakkuthu… naan vaikkira anbai orutharum purinjikka maatengranga….. ithe dhum, thanni adikkaravan, pala ponnunga kooda sutharavan ivanukkelam kooda lover kidaikkuthu… aana naan…ennoda unmaiyana love ku kadaisila ipadi than nadakkuthu….

[Magi interrupts…]

Magi : dei dei oru nimisham…summa dialog vittute pogaathe… Love ku basic qualification ena theriyuma…you should not be having any pre-notions about the person u are loving….Nee enna pannirukae… album album ah paarthu oru ponnai choose pannirukke… Love na best of three choice illa machi.. athu by chance orutharai paarkumbothu vara vendiya feel….

Raju : ennada solrae… naan love panra ponnu azhaga irukkanum nu ninaikarathu thappa?

Magi : thappu illa machi..thappe illae… Nee love panra ponnu azhaga, cute ah irukkanum nu ninaikkarathu thappu illae… aana azhaga, cute ah irukkara ponnunga la oruthi ya than nee love pannuvenu ninaichathu romba thappu da maame..…. Athuvum eppadi….un mela unakke nambikkai illama, real world la thedama… chat la poi thedirukae… antha virtual world la vara relation ellame virtual thaanda… padichavan thane nee… webpages use panra HTTP protocol eh stateless thaan…data va persist pannathu… appadi patta oru idathula nee unnoda life long persist panna vendiya relation ah thedirukkae…. Enna madathanam da?

Raju : ithu la ennada thappu… ethanaiyo peru chat moolama love pannaliya… avanga life lam nalla illiya….

Magi : irukaangale.. aana avangallam chat la thaan vazhkai thunai thedanumnu menaketu vanthirukka maatanga… chat panravanga kitta entha expectations um illama than chat pannirupanga… appadi aarambicha uravu develop aagirukkalam….and moreover internet love success lam more like exceptions than a rule for others to follow…. Kaadhal kottai maathiri paarkamale kaathal success aaganumna hero ajith ah vum heroine devayani ah vum irukanum…..naan personality ah sollale, but avanga attitude ah solraen….. eppo nee chat la thaan ponnai thedanum nu mudivu panniyo appave athu Kaathal kottai illa… Kaathal Ottai…

Raju : Hmmmmm…..

Magi : athuvum illama unnoda basic mentality eh thappu.. Kaadhal ngrathu thana oruthara paarthavudane manasula uruvaga vendiya vishayam… aana unakku eppadi..unnai suthi irunthavanga lam love panraanga na vudane, neeyum love panrennu kilambirukkae.. ithu childish mentality thaan da… ithu epadi da success aagum nu ninaikkare?

Raju : dei enakku thevaiya da ithellam..thevaiya nu ketkaren..naan paatukku amaithiya, nalla pilaiya thane irunthaen..ellam ennai suthi irunthavanga thane karanam…. Avangalukkunu oru love vanthavudane naan thevai illama poitaen… last 1 month love la irunthappa kooda I remained myself and kept in touch with everyone and not ignored anyone... Aana appa kooda en sister…. Naan pesunalum just formal ah pesittu, konja nerathula busy nu solli cut pannidara…. Ivanga ellam ozhunga iruntha naan en da ippadi poraen…

Magi : machaan onnu sollava…. Namakku oru upset, disappointment nu varumbothu, it is so easy to put the blame on others … naama entha thappum panala… ellam en neram, aduthavanga panna thappu nala than enakku kashtam varuthu appadinu solrathu romba sulabam… aana oru nimisham, namma tea cup ah empty pannitu, namma thappu enna nu yosichom na we can understand things better.….ellarum un mela paasama than irukkanga.. nee than avanga yaaraiyum purinjukkale… Solla pona, nee than da yaar melayum unmaiyana paaasam vaikkala

Raju: ennada solrae… naana… naana…

Magi : aama neeye than… mudhalla oruthar mela unmaiyana anbu vaikara yaarum, athai ipadi advertise pannitu irukka maatanga… aana nee moochukku munnoooru thadavai, athaiye thirumba thirumba solrae… sari naan accept pannikaren..nee un thangachi mela, friends mela laam alavu kadantha piriyam vachirukaen nu… aana nee selfish da… athunala thaan un thangachi, friends laam unkitta mattume niraya pasam vachirukkanumnu, unakku thaan niraya importance kodukkanum nu expect panrae….athunala than avangalukku nu oru love varumbothu un manasula oru jealousy, possessive ness lam varuthu.. athu unnai hurt pannuthu…. ithu thappu da… yosichu paaru unnoda paasame avangalukku baarama irukkalama? Nee kaatura anbu ku, returns ethir paarkariye.. ithu nyayama?

Raju: athu..athu vanthu…

Magi : nalla yosichu paaru da…. Yaarume unnai verukkalae…solla pona ellorum un mela niraya respect um anbum vachirukkanga… unkitta athigama pesama irukarathalayum, unkooda lunch ku varama irukkarathalyum avanga anbu kurainjiduchi nu nee santhegapadare na apo avanga mela nee vachirukkara anbu ku avlothana strength….avalothana un belief avanga mela?

Raju is unable to talk anything…he realizes his folly… he feels like all his ego of “Good boy”, “loving brother”, “loving friend” getting shattered… kanneer vida aarmbikkaran….

Magi : dei dei looosu, enda azhare

Raju : nee sonnathu ellam nyayam thaanda… yosichu paartha enakke puriyuthu about how I had been.. I really have been a selfish guy towards my friends or parents or my dear sister…. Anbu, paasam ku sariyana artham theriyaama irunthuttaen…. I feel a disgusted lot about myself now da…

Magi : Come on da, why shud u feel disgusted…. Solla pona unkitta iruntha kurai unakku purinjathuku nee santhosapadanum… yosichu paaru… u had already been a good guy…. Now intha kuraiyum nee correct pannikitta u will be a better guy..isnt that reason enough to be cheerful about?

Raju : you are right da..very much….

Magi : unnai suthi ullavanga love panama irunthiruntha, it wudnt have brought the problems in u outside… u wudnt have come out of ur comfort zone at all to try things, to take a shot at love, to understand urself… paarthiya… unnai varutha pada vachaalum, athunala unnai positive ah develop aaga indirect ah karanama irunthirukkangalae..athu than da nijammave true relation…. Unakku enna kurai machi.. chamathu pullai, elders ah respect panra thanmai, oralavu handsome, hand niraya sum vaangara IT professional….. unnoda think panra vitham mattum thaan nee slight ah adjust pannikanum

Raju : you mean Attitude?

Magi : u r at-it-dude…. Yea rite… athuvum onnum periya vishayam illa….entha mindset ullayum maatikama, mind ah light ah vachikitta vaazhkai santhosama irukum… nee ninaicha mathiri unakku nalla girl friend um kidaippanga… Good luck da !!!

Raju : thanks a lot da machi…. Nee sonna maathiri I am blessed to have such good friends around me and even more blessed to have a friend like you… Also ennoda loving sister Nivetha…. Avalai pathi thappa ninaichu naan avalukku, ava en mela vachirukara anbukku periya throgam pannitaen.. ippa solren da.. I will make sure she gets whatever that makes her happy

Magi : Thatz the spirit da.. bye.. paaru semma dark aayiduchi.... innum late ah pona en pondaati udhaipa… naan kilambaren.. bye

Next day… A far relaxed Raju arrives at his office… For the first time in many days he felt a lot lighter and better… He felt like talking to his sister, so he calls her up

Nivetha: Hellooo annaaa… Good morning

Raju : Good morning, nivetha, eppadi irukkae

Nivetha: naan sooper…neenga eppadi irukeenga… it was so nice hearing u now theriyuma anna….. I am so happy hearing u

Raju : hahahaa…watz the matter

Nivetha : enakku semester exam theriyum la..... bad anna u are…. Wish panrathukku than call paneenga nu ninaicha….. u totally forget ah

Raju : oooh ooh sorry sorry da.. Wish u the very bestttttttt of luck.. u are going to score much higher than previous sems

Nivetha : hehe thanks a lot anna…. Sari naan exam ponum..phone ah vachidava

Raju : yea yea…. Bye..take care…. Hey hey nivetha oru nimisham

Nivetha : yes anna…

Raju : I love u a lot nivii……….so glad to have u as my little sister :)

Nivetha : :D ippa enna na thideernu ithellam solreenga..

Raju : etho thonichu…. Sari bye…exam nalla ezhuthu… Good luck!!!

Nivetha : thanks anna (she hangs up the phone)

Raju felt, he had never been so happy before…. Athe spirit oda he checks the mails… munthina naal PM ku just mail mattum adichittu odunathukku ennalam thitti mails anupirukaro nu konjam tensed ah mail paarthan… Only 1 mail was there in his mail box…. And it was from Roopa….Hi nu subject pottu, she has sent a mail

Aaha… Ithu namma Sasi yoda aalu la… intha mayil ethukku namakku mail anupirukku nu kuzhappathoda mail ah open panninan… ullae paartha oru E-greeting, athu koodave oru side note…

Dear Raju, Miss Roopa misses You,
Will you accept me as, Mrs. Of You??

- Love,
Roopa


Raju ku ethuvum purilae… .ithu kanava…. Illa nijamma..oru velai Sasi ku anuppa vendiya mail ah wrong ah namakku anupichittala nu oru doubt.. apo Hi machi nu oru kural… Sasi was standing beside him

Raju : dei sasi, ennada ithu…… unnoda friend..enakku poi…… ippadi….. ithu enakku thana…

Sasi : haha athu unakku vantha mail thaanda… unnoda doubt puriyuthu… naan than Roopa ku route vittutu irunthaen… but ava route vera, point to point ah ava paarvai un mela than pattucham… athukku help ketka than un close friend ah na ennai approach panniruka… Chennai 28 padathula vara maathiri yaaro yaarukku ingae yaaro nu naanum free ya vittutaen…. Unkitta ava love ah solrathukku avalukku ippathan dhairiyam vanthiruku paaru…..

Raju : (Excited)… enna da solrae….

Sasi : yo man… She loves you da……….

Raju was literally flying……… ennai love panna oru ponnu…….. oorellam fair ah oru ponnu nu thedittu irunthane… enga office laye ennai love panrathukku oru ithayam…. Hmmm Roopa konjam moderate color than...but who cares……. All is fair in love and war…. Kaadhal pannumbothum War seiyyum bothum ellarum fair ah iruppanga nu summava sonnanga…..!!!! I like her….She likes me…. wat else shud matter???


SUBAM



P.S : There it is ... I kept my word... My hero got a heroine........ :D :D :D
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8 comments:

Raj said...

ippo kadhai interestingadhaan pogudhu! :) Finish it faaast! Kadhai epdi mudiyudhunnu orey tensiona keedhu! :D

Raj said...

oh btw...kadhai supera pogudhu! :) Magi romba aazhndha sindhanailaam solramaadhiri irukku! Epdi ipdilaam?! :D

Raj said...

finally! mudichaachu! oru 30000 feet la parandhukittu irundha planea immediatea tharaikku kondu varanumnu crash land panniteengalo?! :D Kadhai super! I liked it a lot! :) As i said, romba aazhndha sindhanaigalelaam ungalaala epdi mudinjidhu?! :D

Mystery said...

hey..very nice..i loved the ending...
happy indeed :D

there r so many instances in ur story which only ppl think inside their own mind...but will never let it out....u have pulled out such things and created a nice story with it...really good..:)

Aaarti said...

Ahhhh..finally it comes to Muttrum.. very nice~~

love the way ur able to write like this..ennala sathyama ippadi kadhai ellam ezhudave mudiyadu.. try pannalamnu oru ennam irukku..parpomm... :)

aduthatho eppo????

Pradeep Jayaraman said...

Mapla super da... I definitely likes the twists in the story.

Kadasila, anda ponnum inda paiyanai plan panni daan love pannirukka. Love layum kandippa arrangement and manipulation irukku. Manipulation illadha lovey kedayadhu.

Patha udaney varadhu just crush. Namma oora porutha varaikkum, innum love ku definition neraya perukku therila. One week pesittu love ku sutharavanga evlo peru irukanga.

Cheran maari.. advise daan neraya kuduthutta...

Aravind said...

LOL!!

magi advice ellam rocking!! :D

//Love na best of three choice illa machi.. athu by chance orutharai paarkumbothu vara vendiya feel//

kadhai ezhudhum munnadi director vikraman padam ellam paatheengaLa? :D


//webpages use panra HTTP protocol eh stateless thaan…data va persist pannathu…//
Cycle gap la unga software influence-um koduthuttenga :P
Actually, I ROTFL reading that!!!

Raz said...

completed nu oru post.. final part nu oru posta?

sutham!