Saturday, March 13, 2010

Uyirae..En Uyirae...- Final part



P.S - Atlaaaaaaaaaaast......... Sep 2008 ezhutha aarambicha story ah March 2010 vetrigarama mudichittaen....... yipeee..so one major block cleared and please expect more posts from me :D

P.S - 2: Dont mind the blog template........ I am anyway gonna change it again...This is a temporary arrangement wonly :)



Click here for Part-I of this story

[Scene-4]
Location : Get Well Soon Hospital @ Mylapore
Time : 1 pm
Doctor Rajaram's cabin.
Dr.Rajaram was having his mid day meals as Nurse Rita drops in with a coffee mug
Nurse : Enna doctor ippadi medhuva saptutu irukeenga...anga patients lam ungala consult panrathukku thudichittu irukkanga....
Dr.Rajaram : Patients na konjam patience-um irukkanum Rita....... enna than naan doctor ah irunthaalum, only when I am in good health I can look after others health' illiya...athukku velaikku naduvilayum vela velaikku correct ah sappidanum

Nurse : athu sari..unga custom ungalukku.......avanga kashtam avangalukku..... inthaanga Coffeee.. daily 3 cup coffee kudikkarathu mattum ketta pazhakkam illiya

Dr.Rajaram : aama ketta pazhakkam than enna panrathu...... vida mudilaye.... thappo right oh ovvoru manushanukkum oru addiction irukkum..enakkum ethavathu irukka vendaama...athan ithu ....

Nurse : Basic ah ve ungala jeyikka mudiyaathu....... idhula pesi jeyikka mudiyuma doctor...

Dr.Rajaram : (sips the coffee) aaha aaha..sooper coffee po...... chumma solla koodathu....... Nurse's coffee na Nurse's coffee than..besh besh sooper ah irukku.....

Nurse : vilayadatheenga doctor..... seekiram seekiram..... patients lam wait panranga paarunga...... antha IT company pasanga oru paiyana kootitu vanthaangalae......
Dr.Rajaram: Yaaru Chinnasamy ngra chinnu thaane......theriyum theriyum..... avanoda appan enakku childhood friend
Nurse : appo neenga avangalukku Family doctor ah
Dr.Rajaram : apadi lam illa........ Family Friend than... eppavachum meet pannipom........ sollirukan avan thannoda pasangala pathi
Nurse : sari, Chinnukku neenga sonna test lam eduthaachu.... avan friends lam ungalukkaga than waiting..........Office la permission kettutu vanthirukkangalam....... result ah therinjittu seekiram ponum nu avasarathula irukanga........

Dr.Rajaram : intha software company pasanga thollai thaangalae....... office la evvalo neram nalum velai paarkama arattai adippanga.........aana ippadi oru thevaikku nu velila vantha kooda seekiram ponum seekiram ponum nu parappanga

Nurse : athu sari doctor, ennathan office la velai paarkalenalum, angaye iruntha salary ku prachinai varaathu........ithu thirumba porathuku late aachuna, leave, loss of pay nu poiduchunna........ Salary cut aayidume...anyways....avangala first attend pannungalen.....

Dr.Rajaram : With pleasure madam...... Come on lets go......
(Doctor gets up and walks in to the room where our Hero Chinnu was admitted)

Chinnu voda friends Hari, Paarthi, Shanki, Sushi, Jaanu were standing anxiously around Chinnu, as he was still recovering from the giddiness

Nurse : Inga paarunga..patient ah suthi ninnuttu irukkanga..... konjam idam kidaicha podhume...enga paarthalum circle form pannida vendiyathu

Doctor : (to nurse) Chinna pasanga thaane...ithukku peru than Ilavattam nu solvaanga..free ya.... vidu........ (sathamaga) Friends..... enna panreenga...... paavam antha paiyan..... kann muzhikkum bothu avan thalaiya suthi neenga ninnuttu irukkaratha paartha, marubadiyum thalaiya suthidum avanukku...... konjam air varattume patient ku

Paarthi : enna doctor... kilambu kaathu varattum nu solreenga
Doctor : haha.......good one...... irunthalum naan appadi sollalai........ konjam spread aagi nillunga nu sonnaen.....

[Meanwhile Chinnu slowly re-gains his consciousness much to the relief of his friends]


Hari : ennada Chinnu ippadi pannitae... oru pechukku nee ava azhagula mayangiduve nu sonnaean..... nijammave mayangittiye da..... avlo azhagava iruntha
Chinnu : (suthi paarthuttu understands the situation he is in) oh my GOD...what I am doing here........ innaiku oru delivery irukku....naan ponum
Paarthi : dei dei overaa scene podathe da..namma Manager inga illa..Doctor than irukar... nee delivery athu ithu nu pesina avar vera maathiri purinjikka poraar
Nurse : Mister...
Paarthi : yes Sister!!!
Nurse : ipadi neengale mokkai pottutu iruntheenga appuram naanga eppo than pesarathu enga Doctor ah pesa vitteenga na thane avar Chinnu voda problem ah pathi explain pannuvaar....
Hari : Sorry doctor, Please sollungo.... We are very curious to know if there is anything serious?
Chinnu : enda Hari intha build up......Doctor, pasanga thevai illama kalavara pattutanga ninaikaren........ Devathaiyai kanden... Kaadhalil vizhuthen maathiri Kaal thadukki vizhunthen....... avlothan.... mostly enna..vitamin kurai paadu irukkum....... Becosules sappita sari aayidanum ninaikkaren..am I right?
Doctor : so smart...... nee oru software engineer nu prove pannite thambi...... naalu anju vishayam internet ah paarthu therinjukittu udane entha problem kum ithan solution ngrathu......
Paarthi : Sorry doctor........avan oru cashewnut...eppavum appadi than peter vittutu irupan.........neenga solllunga... avanukku blood test lam edutheengalae.. Result vanthatha.....
Chinnu : sss..sorry doctor.... neenga sollunga
Doctor : mm..athu..... ok Chinnu, blood result , ECG report lam vanthathu...... ECG is fine........... but you have a high blood pressure.......and moderately diabetic as well........... BP shoot up aanathunalathan unakku mayakkam vanthirukku
Chinnu : (Shocked) bp ya........ (bp ya bp ya nu moonu thadavai echo aaguthu around the room) ena doctor solreenga.... I am barely 23...... enakku poi BP yum sugar- uma... I cant believe this.......
Doctor : hmm...... nee ketkara kelvi nyayam than......... aana makkal epadiyo diseases um appadi thane irukkum..... ethukum neram illai neram illai nu paraparappa odittu irukkara intha fast food society la.... diseases kum porumai irukkarathu ila.......... athan early age laye vanthuduthunga..........
Chinnu : but but doctor..... I am very health conscious you know....... I am a tee totaller......... alcohols sip paninathu kooda kidayathu.........cigaratte ku strict no no...... beedi enna...... beeda kooda nan podurathu kidayathu....... enakku poi BP nu neenga solratha enna la namba mudiyale doctor.... itho paarunga intha Paarthi.... oor la irukkara A-Z ela ketta pazhakkamum irundhirukku........ ivane last week panina medical check up la all clear aagi vanthirukkan
Paarthi : dei dei nanbana nee....... nambikkai dhrogi.......... romba nalla manasu da unakkku
Chinnu : sorry machaan........ oru emotion la pesittaen........ Enga friends circle laye naan than more health conscious.... athulayum past 2 months ah naan diet la than irukkaen..... i dont drink coffee or tea and only Diet Coke..... Morning sappadu ngra per la enga veetula podara heavy luggage ah complete ah avoid pannitu, I go in for sandwiches @ office.... Gym la enroll pannirukken
Paarthi : aana weekly ethanai vaati povaan nu lam ketka koodathu
Chinnu : summa iru da.. Night kooda soru sappidama tiffin thaan sapidaren..... I dont know being a software engineer working 24 x 7, what else I will be able do to maintain my health........ [sighs]
Doctor : haha...relax thambi relax...... There is a truth and tragedy in whatever you had told...The truth is you have just spelled out the reasons why you got high BP at a relatively younger age........and the tragedy is you had been fooling your own self by developing an illusion that whatever you had been doing is healthy
Chinnu : Doctor....

Doctor : First and foremost........ stop having the illusion that just because you do not smoke or drink means you are a very healthy man..... Smoking and Boozing are a must avoidable but they are only an apparent evil thing known to everyone.... People miss the larger picture here.... there are pretty bad things which do not get classified as an avoidable thing at all and continue to be ...... The Fast foods for example........Do you know the level of sodium and sugar in those foods.... or the Transfats and Saturated fat contents? Single handedly these junk foods can lead you to cancer, brain tumor or heart attack
Chinnu : ......
Doctor : Secondly, you were referring to your skipping breakfast as part of diet.......that is the most insane thing that one will ever resort to......... Breakfast is nothing but Breaking the Fast, i.e breaking the starving period for around 10 hrs since the previous night...... It is the most essential part of a day's meal in providing the energy for your day's activities..... By ignoring the breakfast routine and resorting to snacks at odd times you had only been putting yourself at high risk category... And definitely when you starve like this........ you would have gone for fillers, like biscuits or puffs to keep your mind happy.......
Sushi : Agreed doctor...... Not only Chinnu, but almost all of us take up snacks between lunch and during the evenings... But then.....arent we in the age where the elders would say "Kallai sapittalum karaiyum"..... Our digestive system are supposed to be in the prime form at this age.....
Doctor : you seem to be a smart girl...........but you miss a point here...... The age old adage you mentioned is not false at all........ But imagine............when was this coined....... At an age when the youth had to toil hard daily to earn their meals....... Even the rich kids had to keep themselves physically fit for the demands of the then society. But what is happening today? You get everything at the click of your mouse and the comfort of your house....the physical working part is almost literally removed........... But does the people really compensate for the loss of the advantages they had with the earlier life style.......... Today.....even for visiting a friend at next apartments you need a bike or a car, even for going to your office in the 1st floor you take up the lift.........Dont you ever know that climbing up the stairs brings down your pressure......
Nurse : Therinjirukum doctor..... pressure romba irangiduchina low bp vanthudumo nu bayanthuruppanga :D
Doctor : hahah... Good one.......appuram games.... Chinnu paiya..tell me when u last played cricket or football or any such outdoor games?
Chinnu : well....... 9th standard varaikum vilayadittu irunthaen...... Then 10th vantha pinnadi, studies appadi nu responsibilities vanthuttathala I dont go for playing at all..... athukappuram vilayadarathukku naanga enna chinna pasanga la nu enga friends ellarum vittutom
Doctor : mm..paaru.......... adhuvum kidayaathu.......... chinna pasanga than odi odi vilayadanum nu ethum auto pinnadi ezhuthi pottirukangala enna? enna paaru........ My age is 53..naan vaaliba aal illa.......aanalum volleyball aaduven daily......ethuku..... to keep my body fit and keep my mind in good humor.......... ippadi wrong ah na food habits nala udambula toxin mela toxins ah eduthukittu, athai compensate panra maathiri entha oru physical activities um panama.......... ottu mothama unnnoda body system ah nee kai vittutae..... athuvum paavam evlo than handle pannum...... Infact ithu verum warning sign thaan........ nee sutharikkalena it can lead to Cancer or other potentially risk diseases.......
Chinnu : enna solreenga doctorrr... :( :( :(
Doctor : Kanna unna bayamurutharathukaga naan ithellam sollala.......unna maathiri niraya youths and that includes ur friends here......... world economy pathiyum politics pathiyum, ovvoruthar personal life mishappenings kooda correct ah therinju vachikkaranga.......aana health vishayathula mattum arai vekkaduthanama konjam konjam thernju vachikittu, spoil pannikarom nu theriyamalayae avanga health ah spoil pannikaranga....... antha aathangathula than konjam niraya pesittaen......... Dont worry.........all is not lost............ blood pressure moderate ah than irukku...... if you wake up now and change ur life style understanding your body you can lead a very healthy life.........
Chinnu : hmm..ok doctor....... eppadiyo bayamuruthinalum fact ah solli puriya vachirukeenga..... I will definitely abstain from the garbage foods and the garbage life style...sss abba over advice....... konjam thoonga vidunga doctor
Doctor : hahaha...
Paarthi : (mimicking Doctor) Good one!!! appadi thane solveenga doctor
Doctor : makkals lam nakkals nalla than panreenga........... sari...... enakku time aachu..adutha patient ah poi paarkanum....... Vartta... Good luck and Get well soon
Chinnu : Thank You doctor!!!
(Saranya.......the white chudithar angel of Chinnu drops in in the room in a hurry)
Saranya : oh oh...what happened to Chinnu......... what happened to Chinnu....
Paarthi : enna ma enna..enna avasaram
Saranya : illa....... naan kaalai la coffee sappida poirunthappo en munnadi oruthar mayakkam pottu vizhunthuttar......... enakku romba bayama pochu...........udane I screamed
Jaanu : scream panniya... enga yaarukume ketkaliye
Chinnu : Icecream voice ponnukku..High scream eppadi varum Jaanu.........
Jaanu : dei jollu jaggu..mooodu da
Saranya : ivara andha nilaima la parthavudane enakkum appadiye mayakkam vanthuduchu........ appuram friends than thanni adichi ennai ezhupinnanga
Paarthi : nalla technique ah irukke... Whiskey ah brandhy ah......
Saranya : haiyyo.........water en face la sprinkle panni ezhupinanga nu sonnaen
Hari : verum water adichale mayakkam thelinjiduma
Paarthi : akka vukku low budget mayakkam vanthiruku pola....... athan water wash laye enthiruchittanga.....
Saranya : appuram naan friends kitta visarichathula sir ku than mayakkam vanthathu... intha hospital la admit pannirukkaratha sonnanga...... Ivara pathi Appa kitta phone la sollumbothu than therinjathu.........en appa vukku onnnu vitta cousin than ivanga amma vam......... enakku ivar Aththan murai venumaam
Paarthi : adra sakkai ...Love waves unakku satharanama work out aagala da..Tsunami range ku work out aayirukku
Saranya : kandippa poi paarthuttu va nu appa sonnanga...athan udane taxi pidichu odi vanthaen.......
Hari : taxi kula utkarnthe vanthirukkalame...en odi varanum
Jaanu : niruthu da...nee sollu ma
Saranya : Chinnu..... enai parthutte irundha neenga en mayakkam pottu vizhuntheenga...... naan en athai paarthu mayakkam pottu vizhanum
Chinnu : athu onnum illa Saruu..naama rendu perum orae nerathula Kaadhalil Vizhunthuttom..... WE just fell for each other because we are made for each other
Hari : adappavi adappavi....... doctor ippothaneda 1 hr lecture koduthuttu ponaaru......ponnai paarthathum plate ah maathi pesi kavuthuttiye da
Paarthi : Vidu machi....... Avanukku love work out aayirukku.........as friends naama santhosapaduvom...... Love dialogues lam anubavikkanum aaraya koodathu........ vaa naama ellorum kazhandukalam........ Machi Get well Soon da !!!!
[Subam]


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3 comments:

Gargling Garbage said...

He he .. Fallin' in love ku semma explanation :D ... Nalla vishayam.. Nalla karuththu.. Nalla sollirkenga :)

And I wonder how I missed that tere liye (teriyaliye) in scene 2! ROTFL after reading that! :D

Waiting for more regular kalakkal kirukkals! Hope you wouldn't disappoint :)

Chandrika Shubham said...

I liked the cartoon in the profile pic. :)

Mohamed Sadique said...

Y no updates from u...?

My humble request,

Pleaz start a new story like "uyire en uyire" wit different genre.

I love ur comical timing sense in narration.

ALL THE BEST!

With regards,

Sadique

www.madurailover.blogspot.com

(tzms@in.com, sadique2007@gmail.com)